• Published 3rd Dec 2011
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You're my favorite Princess ever! - Jinadan



Luna adopts Pipsqueak as a son. And she has feelings for another pony.

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Most Wonderful of Nights

You’re my favorite Princess ever! : Most Wonderful of Nights

The evening rays consisting of orange hues of warm sunlight filtered through the half opened window and fell on Luna’s eyes. Awakening from her slumber, she noticed two things, the first being Pip’s absence, and the second being that she had to get back to Canterlot straight away to raise the moon, or her sister might start sending guards to look for her. In a moment of haste, she forgot about Pip, left the house and immediately took off to Canterlot.

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A few hours ago...

Celestia’s Sun was now high in the air, and Pip awakened to see Luna still deep in her sleep.

"Hey Princess Luna, Wake up! I told Pinkie we’re going to make cupcakes today!" Pip exclaimed, pushing Luna back and forth. However, the alicorn was still in a slumber. Minutes passed, and even with his constant pushing and calling, she still had not woken up. He started to become gloomy, but he was determined to bake cupcakes with her favorite Princess today. He waited and waited, but she was still deep in her state of relaxation. An hour passed, and now he was wearing a sour face of disappointment. The colt rested his head on his hooves, counting every second that passes by, hoping that she would rise soon. The door suddenly burst open, with the party pony standing outside.

"Hey Pip, what’s taking you so long?"

“Princess Luna is still asleep.” He gave Pinkie a sad, gloomy look.

“Well duh, after all, I’m sure being a Princess is hard work. Come on Pip, let’s go first. ”

Pip just sighed, as he followed Pinkie to Sugarcube Corner.

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Luna had a battle in her interior monologue while flying back home, her emotions was playing with her, and she just felt utterly terrible.

You just stayed at his house, and you just left him alone without him knowing. What if an accident happened to him? He wanted to spend some time with you, yet all you did was sleep. What is the matter with you? You’re just using him. The Princess of the Night making use of a poor earth pony. You’re not even fit to be called a Princess.

Luna could only hold back her tears as she flew back to the castle. Her room in the castle was in her sights now, and she decided to fly straight in her room today. After all, she did not want to see her sister or any royal guards today.

I’m just going to raise the moon, and then I’m going to sleep all the troubles off.

Luna landed on the balcony, and started to work her magic. A silver glow appeared on her horn, and soon evolved into a bright light. Slowly, she lifted the moon high in the sky. She trotted back to her bedroom, only to give an unpleasant sigh at the sight of her sister.

“What were you doing all along little sis? I was worried for you.”

"It’s none of thy business.” Luna tried hard not to look at her sister in the eyes.

“Are you sure you don’t want to talk about anything?”

“Yes, sister, I do not want to.”

"If there’s anything you need, I’ll be here for you alright?’’

Luna did not reply to her last sentence. She just tucked herself in bed, and heard the door quietly lock itself. She looked around, and her sister was not there anymore.

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A bright light falling on Luna’s eyes caused her sleep cycle to stop. She looked out, and the sun was already raised high up in the air. She flew out of the window straight to Ponyville.

She was now just a meter outside Pipsqueak's door, and an overflow of thoughts ran through her mind.

Okay Luna, you’ve got this. Just knock on the door and -

‘’Luna!’’ The door slammed open, and Pip’s eyes beamed as he ran to the Princess and threw his hooves on her front hooves. At that moment, Luna had absolutely no words to say. She had betrayed him, yet he still embraced her. She returned him a small nuzzle, as he released himself from Luna.

‘’I wanted to wake you up to make cupcakes with Pinkie, but you wouldn’t stop sleeping.’’

‘’I.. I.. I apologize.’’

‘’It’s okay. Come on in Luna!’’ He jumped around excitedly as Luna trotted in. Pip’s lightheartedness caused a surge of guilt to wash over her as she entered the cramped house.

‘’Hey Luna, I’m going to play ball with the Scootaloo, Applebloom and Sweetie Belle now, wanna join in?’’

“Where art thou playing at?”

“The field just beside the mountain.”

‘’Okay, Pip. We shall be there in in ten minutes.’’

A gratifying idea popped in her head. Luna flapped her wings, and boosted off to Canterlot, leaving a confused Pip. Using full speed, she reached the outskirts of the city in less than five minutes.

“Guards!’’ Luna shouted with her royal Canterlot voice. A whole squad of Pegasi guards immediately flew towards her.

“How may we serve you, your majesty?”

‘’We need thee to do this now..’’

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The alicorn flew back to to skies of Ponyville, scanning for Pip. Soon she spooted him, along with three fillies. They seemed so awfully familiar, and she soon recalled they were the fillies in the group of foals Pip was in during the Nightmare Night Festival. She gently touched down the floor, leaving the 3 fillies in shock.

“Greetings, fellow villagers.”

The Cutie Mark Crusaders just knelt down and hid their faces in fear.

“Relax, girls, she’s really nice. Scary, but nice.”

“We apologize for being so... mean during the festival.” The princess' compassionate tone was definitely a huge contrast to her shouting at the Nightmare Night Festival.

But soon enough, the awkwardness cleared as they began to play ball. Playing with the foals made her so happy. There was a bubbling joy in her stomach she just could not explain, it was a feeling she had that she just never wanted to end. They played till evening, and the CMCs went back home. Luna knew that the sun going down was the cue for her to return to Canterlot to raise the moon, but she could not just return home yet...

“Pipsqueak, you should return home now.”

“Are you going back to Canterlot again, Luna?”

“Not yet. We shall accompany thee home first.”

They were now just a few steps away from Pip’s house. Luna hoped the pegasus guards did everything right, and she could not wait to see his reaction. The colt just walked into his door, and upon opening it..

His jaw just dropped.

A tear of joy escaped Pip’s eyes. Luna decided that if she could not change the size of the house, she would change everything else. The whole room was repainted in to a cool aqua blue color, and the plain wooden floor was changed into a lavender carpet. The mattress was replaced by a velvet canopy bed, and the chest, by a modern drawer. There was also a mini fridge and a small microwave oven on top of it. He ran to the new wardrobe and opened it, and low and behold, all his belongings were still there, including a few extra card games. Pip was hopping around in an ecstasy he could not express in words.

“We hope you like it.”

“Like it? I LOVE IT!” Pip jumped on her and gave her a tight hug, making her cheeks blushed a crimson red.

“We have to go now, we shall come again tomorrow.”

Pip just smiled at her, as she walked out of the house, giving him one last warm smile as she took off to Canterlot.

Comments ( 71 )

I have one thing to say.

SECRET BUTT NICE.Wait, no. That doesn't work... hm.

Is she playing a game with the child? :applejackunsure:

So cute Luna approves she told me

Making me daaw uncontrolably. Someone get an ambulance before I die of oxygen deprivation.:pinkiecrazy:

This pleases Thor:eeyup:

Comment posted by XxTestName69xX deleted Jul 26th, 2013

Apart from a few errors and some...interesting...word choices this story is progressing well! I salute you, I'm thouroughly intrigued!:twilightsmile:

Also, moustache:moustache:

This story is doing the utter opposite of plummeting to a horrible downfall. It's rising, It's over 9000! It's, it's... I lost track of how far it went.

you deserve a mug of win!

bake cupcakes with her umm:derpyderp2:

Great chapter i gave a many dawwww i swear it was manly :rainbowdetermined2:

I Love This Story Please Continue Dude:rainbowlaugh:

Quit stalling and get to the ultra dawww ending where she adopts Pip, please.
I loved the part where Luna pimps Pip's pad.

64357 End when Luna adopts him?
That's too early :ajsmug:

Jinadan, I love this story. However, I cannot stop d'awwing.

well the guard can do anything huh? also at one point you used "thy" to represent herself when she should of said "I". also Malbatorius the Old one approves.:eeyup:

"Thy" is possessive. It should only be used when a normal person would say "your". ‘’We need thy to do this now’’ should be "We need thee to do this now". And ‘’Okay, Pip. Thy will be there in in ten minutes.’' is doubly wrong; she should just be using "I". If you want that to sound old and fancy all you can do is replace "will" with "shall".

64518 I'll edit it. Thanks mate

64530 in order to get the middle english correct or as close to correct as you can I would suggest studying the German language, the formal second person is almost exactly the same in both for conjugation of both verbs and the pronouns

64558 Learning German? Me gusta.. Haha, I can try that.

64558 Actually comparing it to first-person English usually works okay for me. My > Thy, Me > Thee. I > Thou is more difficult, but neither fits the others.

This is one of the few stories I actually look forward to updates of. If only they came out more often!
I only found a couple of errors. Prime among them was "...and her sister was not there anymore. She"
Just do a CTRL+F search for it and delete the extra word :p
Hope to see the next update soon!

64841 I'll edit that, thanks man :D

Luna just pimped his pad... what next?

MY TEARS. ALL OF THEM. HAVE ALL OF THEM

d'awwwwwwwwwwwwww

'bout damn time we got the next chapter

Stories like this make me feel less dead inside.

Axz

i am so tracking this, can wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

D'aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :twilightsheepish:

On behalf of the kingdoms of Hyrule, Termina, New Hyrule, and the oceans between....... I approve of this incredibly cute fan fiction.

to much skips :(

73801 My country apologizes.

Luna is Scary Butt fun!

but he was determined to bake cupcakes with her favorite Princess today.

ORLY?

I really like the direction of where the story is going :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

Too... Much... Diabetes :rainbowkiss:

Welp... The Night Princess is the best Princess... :twilightsmile:

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: When will chapter 3 come out????!?!?!?!?!? :fluttershysad::fluttercry::fluttershyouch::fluttershbad: That we the cutest story ever.

D'AWWWWWWWWWWWW! Continue.
71493 CUTE

so update soon?:ajbemused:

This is an aswome story
keep it going
take all five of my stars
all my ditzys to:derpyderp1::derpytongue2::derpyderp1::derpytongue2::derpyderp1::derpytongue2:

dear author.
i must say that for the love of my sanity
and others as well
up date

sincerly
Elijah Bleu Casey:twilightsmile:
:pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

D'aaaaaaaaaaaw! :heart:

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