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The Dreamscape. A realm of pure, untainted magic, where your limitations are only bound by your own imagination. Luna guards this realm with her life, but when even her magic isn't enough to stop a malevolent force from infecting it and entering into the mind of a friend, she turns to Twilight for help.
They must enter Fluttershy's broken and tainted mind to stop the corruption before they lose her forever.
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I write stories about the Dreamscape too!
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Sweet! It's fun to write about
8032943 Tell me about it.
...
Really?
A decent first chapter, with some very nice description of the dreamscape's unique topography.
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I...honestly don't see what's wrong with that sentence, sorry. >_>
but thanks!
8046815 It's a cliche, is all. A usually physically impossible cliche at that.
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Oh. I wasn't even aware of that, perhaps I'll edit it out when I update the story.
8047173 It's nothing, really. More of a personal pet peeve than anything the average reader is going to complain about.
Random extra space between open and themselves.
Royal Canterlot Voice.
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Thanks! will fix asap
Man, thems' here demons I tell ya hwat.
_____I was going to say I found an error, but then I forgot about where it was, but then I remembered what it was and I found it again. In chapter two.
_____“Perfect! Row 2 alphabetized A-Z!” Spike hurriedly checked off the long list in his claws as twilight happily bounced in place. “Only twenty more rows to go!”
_____You're a smart enough man to know what I'm talking about, my boy.
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Thanks!
Getting shades of Dead Space with these critters in here.
Interesting that Luna hinted at a gradual infection, with some parts of her mind still clean.
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the faceless pones are meant to reflect the natural fear fluttershy has of ponies she doesn't know. Which is why color and shape is there but no face, no personality. Social anxiety is a hell of a thing, yo.
Demon just takes that and amplifies it to the extreme, 'they will all hurt you'.
Getting interesting.
I love this
Found a typo in chapter 3, once I get to my computer and it has reliable interweb I’ll let you know.
_____Finally. Internet has returned.
_____I bolded them for you.
I shall give this a read.