YESSSSS. All praise to the glory of the Shining Light.
((Mild criticism: Might want to vary and mix up your choice of genital terms, cunt is nice and all, but it can get worn out rather fast ((no pun intended ))))
So in the end candance digs herself a grave while Twilight and Shining join in incestuous love Candence...for the Alicorn of love you need to learn to keep your own m- stallion on the side note good story (once more i feel bad using Twilight emoticons )
Well I'm calling it now. Twilight catching them doing it was just one stage in Cadance's plan to get her hooves on Twilight. Goal: Threesome with her husband and his sister (Anyone remember Shining's reply to Twilight's question in the end of the wedding?). I just bet she's watching Shining watching Twilight.
now the question is... when will Twilight will figure out that Cadance literally trained her for this all this time she foal-sit her without nopony noticing before?
I gues She really loves those two to go to therse extremes... *insert a Not Sure if Gusta picture here*
Wow. When you said you weren't holding back, you meant it. This is dirtier, raunchier, and more depraved than anything I have read yet. And I am absolutely okay with it. Although, I do agree with Ariamaki. Too many of the same word(s). Though, I'm not a writer of sex, so what in the hell do I know?
Now I'm thinking that after he bangs Twlight, Shining will come home to find Cadence "dressed up" like one of the princesses. "One down. Two(?) to go. "
Hah. If Cadance didn't mean for this to happen, she'd have said something in the interim. If you weren't trying to leave her manipulation a secret, a few scenes of her being cagey about what she thought about being caught would be appropriate.
That said, the whole fic has my tentacley seal of approval.
Uh... I REALLY cannot believe I'm going to offer a comment on a story like this... my face is burning as it is from just reading it.
It might help if you change up the words you use for the sex organs a bit. Just using "cunt" over and over again gets very repetitive, and that repetition can be kind of distracting. There are a lot of other words for "vagina" that you can use to add some variety.
Since when did this become a TwiArmor fic? Also I do agree with some other posts, Cadence needs to come see Twilight and let her know that it was her behind this act and she pushed Shining to do this.
coming up for air, the unicorn gasped, paddling back to the shore and just resting there, laying her head on her hooves, her mouth and nose just above the surface of the cool water.
Either they're going to bang each other silly and reconcile their feelings, or they're going to hate Cadence forever for gleefully dragging their skeletons out of their closets. Everyone has those kinds of feelings for their siblings on some tiny, subconcious level, but that's where they should stay. Cadence, you stupid foal. You've gone and jeopardized the once wholesome relationship between your husband and sister-in-law.
This is either going to end really well or go horribly, horribly wrong on a level that words can't even describe.
This is a somewhat different take on the fictional wkncest between Twilight and Shining. But I want to see a scenario where Twilight does not return the feelings, and it's only Shining who's bucked up. But I have never seen that done, and only once have I read a fix where it was Twilight stalking Shining.
1239398 Oh don't get me wrong, I know there are far worse reasons than 'it just IS wrong', but as I said before, as long as you're not having babies, what's the big issue here when you take away the other stigmas?
'Incest is best, give your sister the test!'
Incest probably wouldn't be a taboo at all if humanity was like most other animals and had a set time every year or every month when all the ladies went into heat or something. We'd be able to control birth rates far more easily instead of having condom-babies outta nowhere n' such.
1239417 Heh heh, yeah, I'll admit I haven't fallen prey to this sort of thing either. You never know though....one day, your Mom might suddenly seem much hotter than she should....and then, you'll have nowhere to run.
Just kidding, of course. I have to agree though, the whole attraction to one's siblings does likely come from the very same thing that causes us to enjoy sex in general so much in the first place. The average person bonds far better with their brothers and sisters than they do anyone else in their life outside of maybe their parents, but due to taboos on age differences and such, I would have to say that incest is far more likely to happen between brothers and sisters than it is likely to happen between Mother and son or Father and daughter, et-cetera.
Unfortunately, a lot of people actually do on some level or another. Thing is, those feelings tend to stay deep in the subconscious where they fucking belong. Cadence went and opened a forbidden can of unholy worms on these two. But you know, retarded shipper logic. This is Cadence we're talking about. Apparently she thinks it's okay to brainrape ponies into loving one another.
The only justified incest is between Celestia and Luna. Because, you know. Not like they have a lot of choices that won't die like pet hamsters.
YESSSSS.
All praise to the glory of the Shining Light.
((Mild criticism: Might want to vary and mix up your choice of genital terms, cunt is nice and all, but it can get worn out rather fast ((no pun intended ))))
Oh dear now comes the incest for real
Consensual incest, why are you so fucking hot?
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I have the weirdest boner right now!
good job there cadance >:
1239767 Likely 'cause it's taboo.
And we all knew it was coming, fast update though.
Weak-limbed and shaken,
So in the end candance digs herself a grave while Twilight and Shining join in incestuous love Candence...for the Alicorn of love you need to learn to keep your own m- stallion
on the side note good story (once more i feel bad using Twilight emoticons )
Well I'm calling it now. Twilight catching them doing it was just one stage in Cadance's plan to get her hooves on Twilight. Goal: Threesome with her husband and his sister (Anyone remember Shining's reply to Twilight's question in the end of the wedding?). I just bet she's watching Shining watching Twilight.
"This day is just pe~erfect!"
Cue evil manipulator laugh.
I know I'm not being particularly inventive, but I don't know how else to respond:
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my mind right now
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dafuq did i just read?
This is in that category of fanfics I refer to as YIWTfics, which stands for "Yeah I Went There" fics.
And on a scale of to , this one gets
I feel ashamed to be aroused by such a precise and detailled description of their masturbation
Still, this is where shit gets real
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!?!??! This is... I have no words to describe this.
BOOYAH!
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Yes.
All my yes.
now the question is... when will Twilight will figure out that Cadance literally trained her for this all this time she foal-sit her without nopony noticing before?
I gues She really loves those two to go to therse extremes... *insert a Not Sure if Gusta picture here*
i have the wierdest wingboner right now
I think Cadence should have a talk with her sister-in-law
Wow. When you said you weren't holding back, you meant it. This is dirtier, raunchier, and more depraved than anything I have read yet. And I am absolutely okay with it.
Although, I do agree with Ariamaki. Too many of the same word(s). Though, I'm not a writer of sex, so what in the hell do I know?
whoa. Did not expect that...
Now I'm thinking that after he bangs Twlight, Shining will come home to find Cadence "dressed up" like one of the princesses. "One down. Two(?) to go. "
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This is so damn awesome
One thing; you 'broach' a subject to someone, you wear a 'brooch'
Hah. If Cadance didn't mean for this to happen, she'd have said something in the interim. If you weren't trying to leave her manipulation a secret, a few scenes of her being cagey about what she thought about being caught would be appropriate.
That said, the whole fic has my tentacley seal of approval.
Uh... I REALLY cannot believe I'm going to offer a comment on a story like this... my face is burning as it is from just reading it.
It might help if you change up the words you use for the sex organs a bit. Just using "cunt" over and over again gets very repetitive, and that repetition can be kind of distracting. There are a lot of other words for "vagina" that you can use to add some variety.
oh shit
Why can't I thumbs-up more than once? Why?
An excellent cloppy chapter, and I look forward to more.
this is getting SO weird.
Since when did this become a TwiArmor fic? Also I do agree with some other posts, Cadence needs to come see Twilight and let her know that it was her behind this act and she pushed Shining to do this.
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Well now... Twilight is certainly taking initiative this time. I'd bet money Cadence will love it.
Thanks for the quick update!
Either they're going to bang each other silly and reconcile their feelings, or they're going to hate Cadence forever for gleefully dragging their skeletons out of their closets. Everyone has those kinds of feelings for their siblings on some tiny, subconcious level, but that's where they should stay. Cadence, you stupid foal. You've gone and jeopardized the once wholesome relationship between your husband and sister-in-law.
This is either going to end really well or go horribly, horribly wrong on a level that words can't even describe.
This is gonn a be fun.....
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Well now it's just inevitable that Twilight will be dragged into Cadence's "changeling convert" fantasy.
This is a somewhat different take on the fictional wkncest between Twilight and Shining. But I want to see a scenario where Twilight does not return the feelings, and it's only Shining who's bucked up. But I have never seen that done, and only once have I read a fix where it was Twilight stalking Shining.
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Oh don't get me wrong, I know there are far worse reasons than 'it just IS wrong', but as I said before, as long as you're not having babies, what's the big issue here when you take away the other stigmas?
'Incest is best, give your sister the test!'
Incest probably wouldn't be a taboo at all if humanity was like most other animals and had a set time every year or every month when all the ladies went into heat or something. We'd be able to control birth rates far more easily instead of having condom-babies outta nowhere n' such.
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Heh heh, yeah, I'll admit I haven't fallen prey to this sort of thing either. You never know though....one day, your Mom might suddenly seem much hotter than she should....and then, you'll have nowhere to run.
Just kidding, of course. I have to agree though, the whole attraction to one's siblings does likely come from the very same thing that causes us to enjoy sex in general so much in the first place. The average person bonds far better with their brothers and sisters than they do anyone else in their life outside of maybe their parents, but due to taboos on age differences and such, I would have to say that incest is far more likely to happen between brothers and sisters than it is likely to happen between Mother and son or Father and daughter, et-cetera.
Personally, I want to se this wend with a Twiliht/Shinin Armor/Cadence threesome. That's hat i'm hoping for.Thre aren't enough Twilight/Cadence fics.
Well now.... isn't that something. Go Twiliy go Twiliy Gooooo!
*Sigh* The shit I put up with.
UPDATES?! GOD BE PRAISED!!!!
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.......no....they really don't.
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Unfortunately, a lot of people actually do on some level or another. Thing is, those feelings tend to stay deep in the subconscious where they fucking belong. Cadence went and opened a forbidden can of unholy worms on these two. But you know, retarded shipper logic. This is Cadence we're talking about. Apparently she thinks it's okay to brainrape ponies into loving one another.
The only justified incest is between Celestia and Luna. Because, you know. Not like they have a lot of choices that won't die like pet hamsters.
...wow
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Yes.
These were pictures of me alive... and now I can't make them again... so won't you join me in the killing of Pinkamena Diane Pie? ( Good story btw)