It was just supposed to be a simple set up for this year's Summer Sun Celebration.
But then everything goes downhill as:
His beloved aunt and teacher has disappeared without a trace.
A nursery tale is apparently real
And five insane mares won't leave him alone long enough to undo this mess.
In hindsight he really should have just let the butler go to Ponyville instead.
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This is an interesting alternate universe. I'd love to see it continue.
I really liked this. I hope you keep up the good work.
this is an interesting story, I always love BB's arrogances, and seeing him knocked down a few pegs is always fun. I wonder what you mean by magically dead does that mean he can't use magic?
My my. Is that a different take on the Deviations IDW comic? If so, it's very welcome.
Though you may wish to look for an editor. There were a few issues they could've helped iron out, especially since the flow of your story is pretty good.
Already far better in execution than the comic, that's for sure. It keeps his arrogance, but doesn't say "Yeah, I'd be wasting time making him somewhat likeable, so I'll just write a bashing fic as a comic".
Not bad. Please continue.
Hey there. I have to say, this looks to be off to an intriguing start. I have to admit, I kind of like the idea of "Twilight and Blueblood being semi-friendly competition with each other" as well as Blueblood's point about the dragon egg test. At the very least, the "semi-friendly competition" thing has seemed to convince Twilight to be a better friend to Moondancer (as well as, probably, Twinkle Shine, Minuette and Lemon Hearts) AND has toned down Blueblood's jerkish tendencies SLIGHTLY.
And, yeah, Blueblood's misadventures in Ponyville HAVE been pretty entertaining so far. But, now things are about to get serious (well, at least SEMI-serious).
I'll definitely be looking forward to more, but am quite willing to be patient.
So why did you delete the comment anyway?
I love this! I added this story to my favs and I cant wait to see what happens next
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A combination of not reeeally getting how this site works and 'gosh-this-was-dumb-i-should-get-rid-of-this-before-anyone-notices' thought process. It is honestly a small wonder I am able to put anything on the big wide web.
ANYWHOS
Blueblood can use magic, the comment from the teacher was more of a dismissive line to his family/family line
Like 'If there were so powerful and great/had anything USEFUL to Equestrian society, they wouldn't be so insufferable and lazy'
I'd.....soooorta like to continue this story beyond Nightmare Moon's return and elaborate
on that lil more and see how Blueblood would deal with other main villains but I'm not too sure on update speed/interest on that.
Plus, I know deep down one of the bad futures from the show may come to pass more easily with Blueblood in the lead instead of Twilight.
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Thank you!!!
On one hand I can see how this would get sort of long and repeative in a comic but on the other it is such a fun challege to try to make an arrogant character likeable.
And like, I don't think I'd have been so disappointed in the official deviation if Blueblood hadn't had such a strong showing of being /capable/ in a previous comic
Love this story
Can't wait for the next chapter
I like how it starts, but I really don't see how any of them other than Fluttershy could end up as his friends. Especially Greedy Bi-, er, I mean Rarity.
Oh man, I wish this would continue!
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Believe me when I say, I'm working on it.
It's taking a lot longer than I thought it would, even with the glacier pace I write but EVENTUALLY there'll be another chapter.
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from one glacial writer to another, i understand ya.
Tracking this story, just in case.
Well, it's looks promising, wouldn't hurt for me to track it. if the author is planning to return someday.
This is fun. I’m a Blueblood fan myself, and it’s funny how his take is similar but yet wholly different. Hope to see more, even if it’s going slow. My last delay on a story was over a year, so don’t worry none about delays.
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one can only hope.