• T My Little Apprentice

    When a remarkable spell summons a human mind into the body of a unicorn filly, Princess Twilight Sparkle does the only thing she can think of: Take on an apprentice.  · Starscribe
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For nearly a thousand years the ancient prophecies of Clover the Clever sat unread in Canterlot's forbidden archives. Until the day that Celestia took on an apprentice, and everything changed.

Sunset Shimmer is smart, resourceful, and determined. No matter how many new lessons Sunset learns, she just isn't satisfied. Equestria is in danger, and Celestia refuses to give her the power it would take to help defend the kingdom.

Another pony might've given up and trusted her princess to handle things. Sunset Shimmer isn't like most ponies. If Celestia won't deal with looming threats, Sunset will take matters into her own hooves. She'll find allies for Equestria even if she has to leave the universe to do it.

A prequel set in the continuity of My Little Apprentice. This story is not required to understand that one, or vice-versa.

This story was written at the behest of Two_Bit, who is sponsoring it on my Patreon. As usual, cover by Zutcha.

First Published
18th Mar 2017
Last Modified
18th Mar 2017
#1 · 1w, 3d ago · · ·

Okay, I'm hooked. Time to see where we're going this time. *smiles* If only I can be as good as you are when it comes to writing.

#2 · 1w, 3d ago · 4 · ·

So she went through the portal, immediately got radiaton poisoning/magic depravation/poisoned by the air and then fell on something sharp. That clearly didn't exactly go according to plan.

#3 · 1w, 3d ago · · ·

Oh Sunset.

Full of confidence, determination and knowledge... but wisdom proves elusive, doesn't it?

Welp, time for you to learn the joys of becoming a robot mare.

#4 · 1w, 3d ago · · ·

>>8031587:moustache: This comment is true for a lot of people.

Great start there, hoping to see more. :twilightsmile:

#5 · 1w, 3d ago · · ·

Interesting start. I can't quite imagine how this fits into the existing storyline, but there's been enough changes to it anyways with the more recent stories that I'm a little uncertain how everything fits together at this point.

#6 · 1w, 3d ago · · ·

Yeah! More MLA related stuff!

#7 · 1w, 3d ago · · ·

Interesting to see the culture shock from traveling in the other direction this time.

#8 · 1w, 3d ago · · ·

Hmm I wonder where she landed.

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