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The year is 2041. A time of great innovation and desperation. A humble toymaker is heart broken by the loss of his daughter but before dying, he promised her one final wish. In the backdrop governmental and corporate power struggles, he and the mane six will have to find a way to dodge the lures and the dangers of the era. Will they be able to find some peace in the chaos of the world or fall before the ever changing onslaught?

MLP in a cyberpunk age.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 6 )

What an interesting concept! Very nice writing, save for a few spelling errors here and there. Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

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Thanks for the comment. Within a week or two, I should have the second chapter ready to go. Kinda expected a bit of a harsh response from this site but I'm glad that I was mistaken.

Heheheheheheheh. Waiting for the next chapter. :pinkiecrazy:

Just want to let you know that I'm still reading, and I'm still loving it. :raritywink:

You might consider giving Twilight and the other MLP members some kind of food-to-electricity conversion system so that they can enjoy food and drink, at least if such a system can be fitted, although I imagine she wouldn't be too happy about having her mechanical innards worked on.

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Again, thanks. I've spent a bit of time trying to find a proof reader and to get my creative mojo back. My university classes are starting up as well but I should be able to squeeze myself some time to get a update done every two to three weeks.

As for the digestive issue, don't worry. I've already have a plot element to deal with that.

Cool.

AI ponies.

Still, there's a bunch of typos. Nothing major but you may wanna look over the chapters before release.

Also, will we see robotic versions of the Mane Six and the other ponies?

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