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Silver Inkwell


"Take me away to a dream and I will live like it was real, wake me up to reality and I'll live it like it was a dream."

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Will Rainbow Dash be able to finally confess her real true feelings for Applejack or not?

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good story! I wish it was a pinkiedash story, but it is still good!:twilightsmile:

Yay~ AppleDash story~ :heart:

8018198
I figured that it was about time for one.
And also, thanks.

8018847
Their love?
Well, yes, it did, but then again...
THIS IS A SHIP FIC.

8018849 they like confess, and then BAM! Sex. Do you see how that might escalate a bit too quickly

8018854
Yes, but COME ON!!!
I was bored, OKAY!!!
AND I AM LITERALLY RANDOMNESS!!!
I MEAN HAVE YOU SEE MY OTHER SHIT YET?
I COULD LITERALLY BE CHAOS OR DISCORD, THE SPIRIT OF CHAOS!!!
(I'm also autistic, and lacking in the subject matter are of sleep, a whole lot actually.)

8018854
While I do agree that this isn't my VERY best Romance I've written, at least it's not my WORST.

8018854
I like short stories and they ALWAYS lack out on details.
Heck, do you even see any more Novelettes or Novellas anymore from me?

8018870 give me your worst

8018942
Okay, but let me warn you, these are so bad that men have literally made crap jokes about it while crapping in the toilet,
They're so bad that even I cringe at them because of all the hate,
It's so bad that I just want to burn it in hell until it's pure like an angel again...
It's so bad, it mocks the name of Romance itself.
It's so bad some people have literally gone insane and crazy just because they couldn't handle the story...
It's so bad...
*slaps*
Oh, okay then
True Love

8019478 meh ive read worse hold on while i try to find it

8019478 i couldnt find it,

8021706
Besides, you can go to my stories and Filter the Rating and then go to the very last page to find my 'worst'.

8021718 you just gave me a great idea, i just started a group where i am going to put the worst fics on this site, your fic shall be the first

8021730
I WOULD HIGHLY RECOMMEND THAT YOU READ THE RULES FIRST BEFORE YOU DO THAT.

8021730
Rules:

Do not make groups designed specifically to attack another user or group of people.
Caveat: It is okay to make groups attacking fictional characters. I.e. “We hate Rarity”
Do not make groups designed to attack or organize hatred against a user’s story.

there's a lot of errors in this story. Like "inside her mind and head." It should just be "inside her mind" because your mind is in your head. But It was a great story besides that! (Also, I think this was a little to fast. Like Rainbow stalks AJ. Then Rainbow confesses her feelings. And then BAM, they have sex.)

8032023
ALL SHIP FICS ARE FAST!!!

8032400 Not ALL ships are fast!

Applejack, true to her word, didn’t react or say anything until Rainbow Dash had finally managed to finish up and ended speaking to her. “Oh, well I never knew that you had those feelings for me, but that would explain why you’re on my farm watching me just like a stalker because I see how you’re looking at my body right now and I don’t mind that much either as well,” she said, “But seeing that I already have my shirt off why don’t you take off yours after all, we’re all girls here right now?” she said. “Uh, yeah, sure thing, right,” Rainbow Dash said gulping very nervously, oh my gosh, she thought to herself, she hasn’t said anything about my feelings or emotions yet so is she trying to return the love and affection very subtly or does she just want to see my body instead?

That's a bit quick there, don't you think? This story could easily have been 2k longer. It goes from stalking to sex in 10 seconds flat!

Also, there are many instances where you have both Applejack and Rainbow Dash talking in the same paragraph. They need separating.

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