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Neo Machine


Just a writer, hello. Sometimes I do one thing, sometimes I do another. It's all mostly experimental. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯


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What happens when Twilight Sparkle and her friends are pushed to their limits? How does their friendship and strength hold against a series of evil none like ever before?

Twilight Sparkle, alongside an ever-growing cast of heroes, shall take part in a massive journey. They will fight many evils, go beyond the land of Equestria, and discover what lies beyond the known world. Behold a grand saga that goes beyond order, space, and time.


Rated T For:
> Violence
> Mildly Disturbing Imagery
> Suggestive Themes
> Questionable References
> Pure Coolness


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Comments ( 14 )

Nice reference to Fullmetal Alchemist there

I'm calling it now: Applejack is going to end up doing something to cripple Korsan later on...

part 1:
is “Aye” all that Ivan can say?
part 2:

Crawling along the ground, he looked over the edge of the volcanic crater and saw the pool of lava rapidly rising up the cone.
“This isn’t good,” He uttered in horror.

thanks, Captain Obvious
part 3:
this was both hilarious and horrifying at the same time...I approve
part 4:
:pinkiehappy: loved the “Emperor’s New Groove” reference

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To the extent of everyone else’s knowledge, that is all Ivan says.

nicely done; also:

"...wait, wait, wait. It gets better. When the patient woke up, his skeleton was missing, and the doctor was never heard from again!" Pinkie exclaimed before breaking out into maniacal laughter, finishing her long ramble.
A small beat of silence followed as Twilight, Fluttershy, and Pinkie continued to walk down the stairs. The other two slowly processed what the hyperactive mare was saying. Unbeknownst to them, a faint yellow mist floated in on their decent.
A confused Fluttershy then asked, "What were we talking about again?"
"How I lost my medical license," Pinkie answered.

😄 I see what you did there...though I personally go in a DIFFERENT direction

going out on a limb here, but I'm guessing that the Alicorn transformation didn't work because the Fountain only works for the pure of heart

  • Korsan: we seen time and time again that he had an abnormal amount of rage in his heart, that whatever "pure" intent he had in his work was eclipsed by a desire for power, so there was VERY little chance of it working for him even under the best of circumstances
  • Applejack: I think she actually might have had a chance at having it work for her, but in that moment, she was letting fear and desperation cloud her judgement, making it easier for her to lie to herself and thus contaminate the connection with the source of power she already had access to: the Element of Honesty; that said, while she MIGHT be a worthy candidate for Alicorn status, in that very instance, she had been deemed unworthy

A pony version of Ghost Rider, huh?

Applejack puckered her lips and held her mouth on the bite. She sucked up as much of whatever liquid was in the holes and spat it out across her shoulder before repeating. Blood, yellow venom, and red slush coated the ground over the pony’s shoulder as Applejack continued to clear the infection.

That’a stupid and old cliche that dosn’t even work.

so this is before season 5 episode 18 but after season 4 episode 25-26?right?

:rainbowhuh:Why they no use Rainbow Power?Everypony/one seems to forget about it

“It’s surprising how effective boxes are in hiding ponies.” Pinkie casually answered.

a solid snake reference, you had to make one didnt you

“Over 9000?!” Superbia gasped before immediately restoring her form. “Well, I do it with consistency and strategy.”

this never gets old

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