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Sandstorm94


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Everypony knows of the old filly story of Celestia banishing her sister Luna after she became Nightmare Moon, but what the public doesn't know is that Nightmare Moon had a daughter. Now, shortly before her mother's return, she and her mother's followers are plotting their revenge; but when the heir to the Lunar throne meets an unusual batpony, things will change in ways nopony thought possible.

This fanfic was requested by Alphamon_Ouryuken

Editor: Penalt

FEATURED: 8/12/17

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 31 )

Nice, can't wait to see the rest :pinkiehappy:

This is a concept that I've never seen before, and I can't wait for more.

This story tastes like it has some meat too it. I want another taste.

The Threstrals have probably done this before, it obviously never ended like this so it couldn't have been the mango or the flavor enhancer. Rainbow is the offspring of a powerful alicorn which means some factors of her mother's genes in her DNA probably affected the transformation, thus turning her into a vampony. The Element of Loyalty also could have been a factor during the transformation.

Is this a supernatural affliction, a standard magical curse or spell, or simply the work of genetics? Also I hope she doesn't get turned back into a pony. Please don't.

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DNA altering with unintended side effects...and why not turn her back normal?

By the Golden Throne yes! Vampony for the win! Also it seems like the will of emperor led me to this fic as there no other explanation for me liking it so much

8036479 Surely the Adeptus Custodes have smiled upon thee traveler. Be welcome in this place beloved of the Emperor.

8036232 Eh I'm a rainbow dash fan. The reason why not is because, with the right conditions, situations, and circumstances she can use those abilities for an advantage. Besides, I tend to be a fan of how people react when they find out something scary about a person: fear, lynch mob, secret organization trying to develop weapons, religious people, or mortal enemies. Plus you can decide what traits she has from either vampire lore or use your own imagination with a hint of logic to connect the bridge between the two.

Also, I'm writing this fic, mainly to help with my writer's block, where I'm in equestria with infinite power and knowledge. (Yes I know what it sounds like). Except my emotions have become dormant and the negative ones are more common to activate, causing me to be an asshole to nearly everybody. I know I'm trying to right an op fic here but I'm trying to make interesting as well. I mean I can't just have......well myself solve all the problems.

Which is why I have no emotions except mostly negative ones and a slightly damaged psyche, causing me to make different decisions depending on the situation.

Do you think this will appeal to readers or not? If you don't want to answer simply say so.

I hope I don't come off as a nuisance towards you, I really do.

Reaper of souls

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best advice: watch out making yourself too OP, it is an instant turn off

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It's hard to write a challenge for God. If your character is all-knowing and all-powerful, where is the challenge? Where is the dramatic tension? Particularly if your protagonist knows exactly how to solve any problem presented to them and has the power to initiate that solution easily.

8176856 By all means the guy isn't completely 'perfect'.

The consequences for actually having that power is being wiped from the multiverse, increased negative emotions, sociopath-like behavior, and living eternally forever, even living past the universe dying.

Also his personality was split in half and merged back together causing it to change.

Plus the main reason I'm writing this kinda fic is to help with my writer's block.

Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story? Will she be reaching Unstoppable Rage levels of anger? Will she be giving out any No Holds Barred Beatdowns?

Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

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Not too dark, mainly because of the second chapter

I was not expecting this chapter to be as feels heavy as it was...

This story moves a minute a mile.

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Do not fall into Celestia's trap. If Luna used her power to keep ponies warm and make food grow everything will be fine.

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How can a story be dark as they're not a source of light?

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That's not how nature works and it's also a bad idea cosmically as well as the side facing the sun will become a hot barren wasteland and the side facing the moon will become a frozen barren wasteland and only a thin strip would be habitable and that's only if the atmosphere doesn't go crazy and turn it into planet like Venus or is constantly stripped away due to solar activity.

“ I must warn the others… ” Crypt thought to himself before teleporting downstairs, knowing the fun was about to begin.

This is where the fun begins.

“I’m not worried about it in the slightest,” Celestia said, a mirthful grin forming on her face. “I have already steeled my immune system with my yearly anchor shot. After all, everypony knows that is the most effective way to defeat the dastardly Sneasles.”

The collective groan that followed would have made a Windego run away.

This last part amused me enough to smile.

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Use the Elements! The works right? It always works.

Might I suggest The Lunar Apprentice. That's where I got my Elements idea. Also no all the time just most of the time.

No offence off course. But why does it take so long? Again nothing against you, but i just can’t wait for when rainbow meets the others of the main 6, and has to face her mother.

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I mean, Rainbow Dash is already pissed that she is an element of Harmony, one of the things that banished her mother, so will she work with or against the other elements? And if she works with them, i could imagine it would be a really heavy moment when Rainbow comes face to face with her corrupted mother which she hasn’t seen in a thousand years. And if the two (for some reason) fight each other, it will be epic.

To not even think about the moment Rainbow would be re-united with Luna (and not Nightmare Moon).

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Can not answer because that would be spoilery

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I know, but i hope you get my point.

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