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"YOUR MUSIC IS SHIT MUSIC CAUSE ITS NOT MY MUSIC!!!!!" The protagonist needs to grow up.
I'm tempted to start keeping count of how many statements, questions, and answers you do this with and post them in the comment section each chapter.
Btw I'm ignoring a lot of the errors in this story, but if you are willing to take them as constructive criticism and use what I point out to improve, I would be willing to point them out. Be forewarned I will be brutally honest.
Time flies fast, isn't it? I mean, they started at 6 hours, then she suddenly mentioned it's 4 hours already and in a few paragraphs of dialog it's already 3. Either they talking very slow or it flies fast. Dunno.
Cadence: "I am respecting your boundaries by "Knocking" but asserting my authority as a Princess by coming in anyway."