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Visiden Visidane


Is that a terrorist?!?

Comments ( 30 )

8008964
I'll let you determine that after reading.

Too bad Fluttershy isn't a unicorn. Would have loved to see a joke that Discord has always been her demon or that he bought out her contract from whatever was.

8009100
No problem. I'm sure this story will be around after a decade or two.

8009052 Pegasus ponies obviously fly using magic. Maybe they signed a pact with a tribe of invisible giant eagles.

Glad to see best pony gets to spend an eternity in paradise.

Still it makes me wonder what the cost practitioners of meme magic might experience.

This was unexpected and entertaining. Nice work.

Well, that was certainly... special.

Magic = Cthulu kabuki theatre

Loved the fact that every pony gets a different fate. This was immensely interesting, Vis.

Now I'm picturing demons shaking trees when Applejack bucks and flying monstrosities working Rainbow's wings like a marionette.

C comes after B, but that doesn't make it better. Would you prefer a C grade or a B grade on a test?

8009706

We're not taking a test now, are we?


8009648

Why do you think those apples perfectly land on those baskets? It's because invisible locusts of Abaddon follow Applejack around. They swarm any apple tree she approaches, pluck the fruits when she kicks, then shoot them into the baskets.


8009601

Yes.

8009553

I may limit my Rarity favoritism in Upheaval, but I can unleash it here.

8009747
No, we're making a point. :derpytongue2:

Excellent one-upmanship. Definitely a unique take...

Either I'm missing a joke or it cuts off abruptly?

"What?" Spike glared at Twilight. "That's fucking la

The sudden cut off makes me wonder if Twilight dies right at the end there.

...Is it wrong that I would like to see this continued?

I can only imagine what the eldritch cock might do to poor Twilight...

Made me smile, thanks for that.

Did you press submit too soon? This story seems to cut off abruptly

8011820 she has thousands of years to get into the same freaky things as Cadence. I bet that when the time comes she'll be the one tiring him out :trollestia:

8011820 As a fellow hidden individual, I can definitely say it's not odd. This story is freaking hilarious, and I think it has a lot more comedic potential to be tapped.

Huh. You'd think Pinkie would summon a band of slaads. Or draconequui. Either or.

C comes after B

I get it!

8009747
make it! make the next one! make the next one NOW!

PresentPerfect
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We are amused. :D

You got a "Watch while cast" in there. :B

There's nothing funny about this, it's just disturbing. I get that it's supposed to be a dark comedy but the sheer horror of the situation vastly overshadows any laughs I might have had, never mind the OOCness of Twilight and the Princesses putting me off the story completely.

I put off reading this for a while and I’m sad I did. This was hilarious! Definitely my kind of comedy. And while I get it’s not part of upheaval, I now wonder if there are actual demons and “hellish planes” if there are Heavenly ones?

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