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"Wolf pack", a "special forces"(while being special in somewhat not good way) team with new additions is sent on strange reconnaissance mission to, get this, another world!

With unforeseen consequences unfolding at rapid pace those 6 brothers(and sisters) in arms will go through a series of fun, strange, sometimes grim or dark, maybe random and even disturbing adventures filled with action, drama, songs, exploration and various music all while sorting things out with their relationships and each other... IN EQUESTRIA.

One team. One strange mission. One colorful world. A double rainbow worth of adventures. And don't forget about that one, mint colored you-know-who!

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Rated Teen for violence scenes and strong language that comes in at least FOUR different languages.
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Chapters (6)
Comments ( 36 )

I am seriously beginning to wonder where the hell the whole Human/Lyra/Hands thing came from.

Also, this was stereotypical beyond believe and NOT ACTUALLY THAT BAD.

867819
Holy shit.

You're NOT going to shoot it down?

THIS I MUST READ.

867819 I believe the original "Lyra is into humans" thing derived from her human-liked sitting posture in some of the episodes. Some guy made the connection, and it stuck.

Ah, a good, old-fashioned, "oh crap" moment to start things off! I like it already!

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"True" Prologue is up! Hope you'll like it.
Stay tuned.

P.S. Made a few edits and added music that I forgot to put in. Enjoy and comment.

...At the end of the chapter. Did you really do that?

873221
Did what? Sorry, I don't get what you're trying to say.

874749

Oh, c'mon. Something like "ADVENTURE TIME!" doesn't just fly right past me. I saw it. :facehoof:

Don't forget to comment and leave opinions!

The format is a bit annoying to read. Perhaps spaces between paragraphs and indentations? Would be easier to separate somethings then. :twilightsmile:

981878
This is sadly so.
Still looking for proofreader and editor. Guy who helped me with prologue is currently busy so I need additional help.

I felt that this'll be a good place to end part 1 of the 1.2
Enjoy and comment.
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P.S. Do you guys prefer longer chapters or this'll be fine too?
P.P.S. What do you think about illustrations and selected music?
I mean, if it's not interesting I'll just cancel it, because, why bother everyone with not interesting stuff?

Damn, the ponies are really small in this fic. Anyway keep it up !!!

so lemme get this straight the USA is still around and is its own country still right?

993557
Yep. Where do you think Jake Anderson comes from?

Ok. Just for future reference... Only one charactor speaks per paragraph. It helps to make it less confusing for the reader.

Neat another chapter, though I'm not sure if Drakon is supposed to sound awkward or its the way I'm reading it, awesome story anyway. Hope to see more. :pinkiehappy:

1468150
Try something along sarcastic awkwardness. Whatever that means.
Like if you accept the reality before you, yet do not believe in it because pure absurdness(like TALKING horses) happening right before your eyes. I think.

HATSUNE MIKUUUU!!!!!!!

sorry had to get that out. Good story btw.

Zen

You know, this is pretty funny how you and I have stories that share similar titles (Another World), yet I've never heard of you or this fic before. I had the idea to write my fic way back in May but it looks like you beat me to getting stuff uploaded. Might have to read this sometime.

1623980
The whole idea for my story was born(in it's complete form, I was doing concepts since January, 2011) as far as, ehhhh, December of 2011, I think?
Eh, gotta figure out a new name for the universe.

Zen

1624074

Why would you have to come up with a new name?

1624134
Because wouldn't it be confusing?
Ah well, I'll think more about it later.

Zen

1624986

Not really, and I'm inclined to think that there are several such instances were two different authors happen to have similar names for their stories.

985701 Love the illustrations and music! The ponies look to be about the size of a 3 or 4 year old child, which isn't much smaller than I thought them to be.

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