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Sweet I can already see sombra as Mr Grimm
8003132 I was actually gonna use Rainbow as Grimm for reasons. (Grimm from Twisted Metal black)
8003086 saw that, fixed it, your welcome
Dollface rarity?
8007549 I don't know honestly. I mean I have seen fanart depicting Fluttershy as Dollface and Rarity as Bloody Mary. But I'll think it over and see which one would fit
Oh man, Dash certainly is perfect for Ms. Grimm, now I can't wait to see who will be my favorite character and the driver of Darkside, Dollface, my bet is on either Rarity or... no, I'll keep it in Rarity.
What a coincidence; I found another Twisted Metal crossover! This is only the second one I've read that's been written by someone else; the first one was really good, and I like what I've seen so far in this one! Could benefit some from an editor, but I still liked it. This just may be enough for me to get around to rewriting my TM1 crossover to a higher quality and continue rewriting my TM: Black crossover... but regardless, I'm looking forward to where this ride goes. Good luck, Speedy!
Ideas, huh?
... Well, the first thing that comes to my mind is Roadkill from TM PS3, but with a black body instead of a red one, stronger armor, a faster special recharge, a slightly higher top speed mixed with quicker acceleration and tighter handling, and driven by two characters seeking revenge. I'm really unsure about the details of the driver and passenger for that one, but what I have already I think is a good start.
A second idea/suggestion I've got is a team-based round, if only to give Junkyard Dog from TM PS3 a chance to show off its alternate special in team games, which will heal all nearby allies except JD itself.
A third idea/suggestion I've got off the top of my head is for Pit Viper from TM1 to make an appearance with its original stats intact: well-rounded armor, speed, and handling coupled to a potentially powerful special attack. I imagine that its smaller size and resulting agility would make it a tough opponent.
Hey, I've finally released my review on this story!
I hope it helps you with your writing and future endeavors, my friend.
My Little Twisted Metal Review
First of all - I LOVE the cover art
however...
Sorry to break it to you man, but the story is still hard to read
a few suggestions:
1. Register on https://grammarly.com and use it - even free version will help you eliminate simple - yet irritating - mistakes:
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2. You really must try writing so that the words don't repeat so often:
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Notice how many times 'soon' is used - unfortunately overusing words in such manner tends to make the story tiresome to read.
3. Try to mix names with he/she/them/they tag more, so instead of:
try:
(sometimes, it's even better to omit the 'said' tag at all, if the context is established).
4. And again - if you haven't already - read the writing guide:
https://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide
Seriously - Ezn did a great job writing that thing, and it can help a lot.
PLEASE NOTE: I'm NOT trying to discourage you from writing or anything like that! On the contrary! I'm trying to encourage you to improve
8066308 first off thanks for the link to that website. It looks like it would help.
But unfortunately I actually type my chapters off my phone and the website isn't mobile friendly.
Thank you for helping though
8066525
If you switch to "desktop mode" in your mobile browser it seem to work (tested it a moment ago on Chrome running on my Android phone) - although it won't be the most pleasant experience for sure
Twilight makes for a great partner to Frank... No, wrong movie.
Jokes aside, I like what you have done with this story so far, also, should I suppose that the driver of Minion was in fact Chrysalis?
8069953 I like the Death Race reference.
But with Minion.......was it the 'whole stadium full of changlings' in this chapter or the 'Cadence's husband and her left for dead in a mine' part in the last chapter that gave it away
8070002 What can I say, for all that I know the driver could be Thorax
, I'm bad to read between lines 
8070023 it's fine. We've all been there before.
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
8149970 read it and see what you think
I was specting Cadance to die in this chapter, after all, you kill that helicopter in the end of TMB, and also it could be a mercy kill to free her from Celestio's grip, yet again, I think you have your reasons.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
P.S. Don't let all those downvotes stop you from finishing this story, I really want to see where do you take it.
8200310 don't worry about Cadence. She amd her family will be okay (plus I was using the helicopter from TM2012 not TMB.) Plus I'm on a long hiatus for this cause of other stories I'm working on and the next one will actually feature a decent amount of hotel sex.
good story, but where's next chapter ?
9872520
Still in Progress.
9872582
Oh ok
The writing itself isnt fantastic. But I'll upvote just for the twisted metal crossover.
It’s been so long since I read this story... but this moment really grabbed ahold of me this time around.