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EclipseSight


Just a guy who likes to write. I let my stories go where they please. I'm just their instrument of creation.

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Even though the original timeline was corrected, the alternate presents caused by Starlight's thirst for vengeance remain. In the last, Equestria has been reduced to a barren wasteland. Nothing lives among the dust and the dark, except one pony. Twilight Sparkle had failed, failed to defend her land, and in the end was forced to destroy it.

Now she wanders, having done so for the past several hundred years. The nothingness that she created refuses to move forward, held in place by powers far beyond her. All she can do now, is wait...for what could be eternity.

However, could an old enemy be just what she needs, even if neither of them really know why. This is, after all...a result of both their actions.

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Comments ( 23 )

7994113 Thanks for the comment. Glad you enjoyed.

Fuck man, all the feels.

7994234 Yeah, that was kind of the point. Glad it worked. Thanks for the comment. Have a nice day.

7994239 i should not have read this in class

7994271 Why not? Did something happen? If you do not mind me asking of course.

7994282 i normaly dont do well with topics that fouse on someone (or somepony in this case) dieing.

7994297 Ah. I'm sorry. I hope I didn't cause you too much trouble.

7994302 na you didnt cause anny troubel.

7994308 I'm glad. Have a nice rest of your day.

7994336 plz respond did they both die after everything was retired since I read the story

7994705 Yeah, by the end of the story they both died. Thanks for reading and thanks for commenting. Have a nice day.

7994756 so how did twilight die I know starlight died of some toxins that she suck down to kill herself in order to be with twilight

7994793 By using up all of her magic. That's what was keeping her alive in the end. Once it was gone, that was it

Wow, I was just thinking about writing something about this possible future. I'm going to have to refrain from reading this story until after I finish writing it. Hopefully it won't be too similar to yours. Would you like me to link mine to you if and when I finish it?

Edit: Mine won't have Starlight Glimmer in it, but it will have Spike. and the only tag I will have is Dark. (I don't think I will add AU.)

7995515 Yeah sure go for it. Good luck with the writing, I look forward to reading it. Have a nice day.

7995604

You too! I'm fascinated by the psyche of an individual who has endured the hardships of isolation. It can make for an excellent introspection into their character as they deal with it. And so I'm very interested in reading about your story after completing mine. :yay:

I broke down and read this story, and I'm glad that I did. What I had in mind is going to have a drastically different outcome, so I'm glad it won't look anything even remotely like a carbon copy of the story. Seeing as how my follower special is nearing, you won't have to wait much longer to see what I will produce from the wasteland scenario. :raritystarry:

8095790 Hey. Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed. I look forward to reading your story when it comes out. Have a nice day!

Wow. Deep. Meaningful. Intense. Great work.

8212933 Thanks for the comment. I’m really glad you enjoyed. This one was a weird departure from my usual style but I think it turned out okay. Thanks again and have a nice day!

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