Ok, before you get mad at me, this is not supposed to be taken seriously. It is only a joke.
Here is sort of my interpretation on how the ponies came to be and how Equestria was made.
EDIT: I have decided to change a few things so as to not conflict with the newest episode.
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Hmm, I don't really understand why...but I really like this story
Hope to see some more of your work in the future. 
First off if this is a joke where is the punchline?
Secondly isn't there an episode of MLP coming out soon that explains the creation of Equestria thus rendering your story irrelevent?
Thirdly explain Hammerspace!
Fourthly does Equestria have nine day weeks cuz that would be awesome.
47355
Goddamnit, there's an episode about that? Excuse me while I go bang my head against the wall.
47381
Yep just checked there apparently it's season 2 episode 11, not released yet but the synopsis indicates that it includes the founding of equestria. Maybe not the same thiing as the creation of equestria. I include sauce for your viewing pleasure http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Hearth%27s_Warming_Eve
nice
47401
Well crap, guess I should delete this story then.
47417
Meh. Leave it up until the episode airs.
It's not like it's serious or anything.
I was already laughing when I read "Faustia." Well done my friend, well done.
that was cool.
epic.
you have 1 alicorn, but where is the other?
47480
Gratias, amicus.
47498
Well, I like to think that there were other alicorns before Celestia. I mean, Celestia is only 1000 years old.
47500
Celestia is older than 1000 years... That's only when Luna was sealed away in the moon. They ruled together long before that.
47504
I see, well think of this as being waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyy before Luna and Celestia. Kinda like Adam and Eve times
47417
DONT. YOU. DARE.
This story is beautiful and, even if the episode itself destroys it completely, this is your work. Your sweat (relatively speaking) was put into this. This is yours.
Sorry, I'm getting a little 'Ayn Rand-ish' here.
47512
Wow, thank you. To be honest I don't think this is as good as my other stuff.
47518
I've read your other works and, as a 'short story writer' myself, I can say that you're wrong. This is a very good fic. It clearly shows how much work was put into it.
47530
Gee, thank you. I guess I underestimate my skills.
Jesus christ guys you are fucking dumb, aint yah? The episode is a fucking play run by twenty year olds with the mentalities of six year olds, it wont at all have the true story on how Equestria was made, because its made for the general public and there is a good chance Equestria probably has alot of dark shit going on when it was starting.
You forgot to add bacon to this story
.......heh, jk, I just got lulz on the brain.......curse you pinkie pie, your randomness has infected me
47546
Oh my... Well, even IF an episode airs that explains the origins of Equestria, there won't not be a stop to the making of history for the gaps that are left, or maybe they'll find a way to ignore it completely.
To the writer, I really like this piece! Except in own opinion, "Faustia" sounds wrong for a goddess. But hey, can't please everyone. Other than that minor detail, this is a great piece of work.!
You wrote a cute take on Genesis 1-2!
And please do not get rid of this story. Even if it becomes an alternate universe, it remains your story.
Part of me wants to ascend to the top of Mount Everest and cry out, "Blasphemy!" But, I'm just going to ignore that part.
Decent writing mixed with a clever concept, makes this a fairly enjoyable story. Hell of a lot brighter than my version of Equestria's founding. I'd give it a 4.5.
And as for all the talk about future episodes making this non-canonical, I'd like to point out that at least 70% of the stories on this site violate canon at some point or another. There's no third alicorn, Trixie never comes back to Ponyville, Twilight isn't a golem/other magical entity, Dinky apparently isn't Ditzy's daughter, and, saddest of all, Doctor Whooves isn't gallivanting all over Equestria with his TARDIS.
But, I don't think anyone really cares about the boundaries of canon here. At the very least, I don't. Give me a well written, enjoyable story, and I won't give a damn how implausible your writing is. So long as its got some effort and thought put into it, any story can become a masterpiece.
And that's i got my cutie mark
maybe later ill tell you the story of how equestria was made!
lol dude, this is some pro stuff. although im not sure that 'thoust' is a word... but its still awesome. dont delete it because its not 'canon'. if all we had was canon, i'd have to put up with "MUFFINS!! MUFFIN MUFFIN MUFFIN MUFFIN MUFFIN" and 'THE GREAT AND POWERFUL TRIXIE COMMANDS THE GREAT AND POWERFUL TRIXIE'S SLAVE, TWILIGHT SPARKLE, TO (THE GREAT AND POWERFUL TRIXIE) SERVE THE GREAT AND (THE GREAT AND POWERFUL TRIXIE) POWERFUL TRIXIE FOR ALL OF ETERNI (THE GREAT AND POWERFUL TRIXIE) TY!!!!' and 'And then Molestia raped several ponies behind the trees in the park'. Personally, i've decided to write stories that deliberately break canon. Which is why, in my stories, Dash isnt a lesbian, Lyra and Bon Bon don't live happily ever after, and eventually, derpy will have an iq of over 9000!!!!!! i mean, over the 8 that people attribute to her. it's what makes things interesting and awesome and 20% cooler than canon.
rock AWN, freaky bro!
And that's how Equestria was made! 8D
47746
Don't forget the Lyra and Bon Bon aren't a couple.
47826
But LyraxBonBon was never canon in the first place.
47546
oh wait, its fiction
47603
THE BACON IS A LIE!!!......wait.
Don't let cannon stop you from writing what you want.
I won't let it stop me from writing mine.
I've got my own take on how the birth of ponykind happend.
I'll write it out later.
It involves Equestria, Celestia, and her husband Jack Harkness.
49264
Jack who?
49327 You've never even heard of Jack Harkness?!
The Jack Harkness?!
How...
Well, try this link here.
This should tell you http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jack_Harkness .
49369
What the crap does he have to do with MLP...you know what, fuck it. I should not question this fandom, its getting rather bad for my mental health.
49264 ...You win the internet.
cool story