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Hello my name is Alexander Wilson, I use that last name because I got sent to magic pony land as Deathstroke the Terminator. So I’d like you to join me on my adventures through this magical land of ponies and it’s darker side.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 17 )

Looks good. Just some parts in chapter 2 looked a bit rushed.

8024257 I'm willing to admit it was a little rushed and that I ran out of ideas for the fights

8024420 but hey if you have ideas or tips on how to do better fight scene in future chapters I'm all ears

More please

8238173
there will be more just having a hard time writing it but it will be here

8245127
Try putting yourself in their shoes, what would you do next?

8473796
That's what I usually try to do but as of now I've had a hard time getting to this story because I've been trying to join the national guard

8474915
Wait, your displaced is joining the nation guard?

8473796
No I am it's why I haven't updated this story

8475004
Sorry, I got confused for a moment. I thought you meant Equestria's national guard

8475042
It's ok everyone gets mixed up every once in awhile.

I like this story even though I like most stories but I like this one more because of deathstroke.

Also I think your doing a good job.

Not bad, though, I would feel a little more grounded if I knew exactly how our Slade-proxy has enough knowledge of the "actual one" to increase pony technology. Same thing for seemingly just falling into the profession of killing (which, thankfully, seems to be staying out of the realm of murder for the time being).

Ooh yeah! Deathstroke.
MOAR

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