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Foals Errand

My friends...Thank you...I love you too


Twilight and Luna have been dating for a few months now. With them both being so busy it was a good idea to just go for a walk together.

Ditching the guards was fun too.

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You glorious b@$£@&[). You got us good!

My, Madam Foals, you had me simply rolling at the end there.:facehoof::trollestia:

I was gonna ask you what continuity this was part of, then I realised this was by you, not Jay-The-Brony. I actually thought to myself, 'You, sugar, are a failure.' :facehoof:

made me smile, as I read the story and I notice first word, that was great

Brilliantly done. :D

Ah you got me. Though, tis a good song, at least.

-After reading four paragraphs-
Hey wait, is this...
-Skims down a few more-
-Skims faster-
-Reads last line-
OH MY GOD REALLY??? Uuuuuuuuuuuuuugh.....

Saw it coming, but still well played.

You magnificent genius, I hate you so much right now. :trollestia:

You my good friend just got a favorite

Oh, for crying out loud.:facehoof: I did not see that coming. LMFAO hard!:rainbowlaugh:

I never see just a TwiLuna fluff that was not a mature one or an adventure one or one o those really long get together kinda things. I barely ever see a twiluna one shot.
I gonna cry.
It beautiful. ^_*
Neat story and clear writing

You...you clever alicorn. You are a freaking genius. I envy you. :rainbowlaugh:
Also you do realize that it's still February...correct?:trollestia:

Yep! ^^ I wanted to do it early:trollestia:

7988617 mmm well that would help with the approvals on holiday lags. Plus I'm guessing you were waiting long enough.
So, yeah, you have a point there. ^_*
...still smart writing and story.

How long have you been working on it?

Had the idea last year. But I decided to just go for it and wrote it in one night. A huge amount of fun even if it was difficult!

7988622 ha
Well all the best writing either take a day or a bunch of years to do so I can relate.
Plus it more fun see what the hell is in your head than doing some soul searching and...finding out you're just a bagger at Walmart.
It works for some people to do that and write in a day. I can do that but...if I just let my mind completely take over it would probably end up; the mane 6 would most likely kill each other and the remains would kill the 3 princess and that would lead on til I completely go mental broke and insane.
...I did it once. Boy I'm never doing that again. And let's just say the friend that read it was maybe fine. *cough*
Soooo... How was your day?

Not horrid, insomnia right now >.<

7988639 well happy I could keep you company.
Got to leave but thanks for the chat.

Darn you foals errand, after i read Lunas cursive part i went back to check what it ment and i saw what you did, you rickrolled us, you clever, clever girl :trollestia:

Well played, very well played.

Having edited this, this was an automatic favorite.
Glad to see everybody's reaction!

I got to the end of this fic, and I knew I had to share it with others. So I did. I featured it on episode 172 of my podcast, Pony 411.

So great job, you made me laugh. And made my friend groan.

Thanks for featuring my story! I'm glad you liked it so much ^^

curse you for rick rolling us!! good story though

That is one rick roll I will happily accept, as it was hidden well and in a great story. Well done sir.

“You should read the first word of each paragraph again."

Goddammit!!!! I can't believe I got Rick Rolled again.

Well this took me way too long to get to and read. And as the story finished I wondered at the cute little love story you've told with this one. Then the odd placement of Luna's suggestion to read the first word of each paragraph...

At first I thought I missed something like the letter that Twi sent to invite Luna, thinking there might be something just after that that might equate to being a really inefficient proposal... then I read it... Good show Foalsy, good show. I'd tip my hate if I hadn't been prohibited by the State of Massachusetts.

Did you seriously just Rick roll me?

Boi. :yay:

Here I was, reading, reading, reading... it was a fine read, at that, really. And then... that came: You should read the first word of each paragraph again.
And I thought to myself: ... wait, what?
And so, I did. And grinned like an idiot for a few minutes. Thank you for that. :twilightsmile:

You are quite welcome!

*facepalms* I did think some of Luna's word choices were odd, but I figured that was just her olden-days way of speaking, not an April's Fool's joke I'd only come across in July.

A nice story and a joke? In one package? Sold.

Comment posted by XzareAce deleted May 21st, 2019


That’s so cool!!! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

Come on everypony, LET’S SING!!! :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:



You, are a very clever Human Being. I didn't expect that!
Great Story by the Way!

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