Twilight and Luna have been dating for a few months now. With them both being so busy it was a good idea to just go for a walk together.
Ditching the guards was fun too.
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Foals Errand
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You glorious b@$£@&[). You got us good!
My, Madam Foals, you had me simply rolling at the end there.
I was gonna ask you what continuity this was part of, then I realised this was by you, not Jay-The-Brony. I actually thought to myself, 'You, sugar, are a failure.'
made me smile, as I read the story and I notice first word, that was great
Brilliantly done. :D
Ah you got me. Though, tis a good song, at least.
-After reading four paragraphs-
Hey wait, is this...
-Skims down a few more-
...no.
-Skims faster-
NO YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!
-Reads last line-
OH MY GOD REALLY??? Uuuuuuuuuuuuuugh.....
Saw it coming, but still well played.
You magnificent genius, I hate you so much right now.
You my good friend just got a favorite
Oh, for crying out loud.
I did not see that coming. LMFAO hard!
Damn...
I never see just a TwiLuna fluff that was not a mature one or an adventure one or one o those really long get together kinda things. I barely ever see a twiluna one shot.
I gonna cry.
It beautiful. ^_*
Neat story and clear writing
Also
Haha
You...you clever alicorn. You are a freaking genius. I envy you.
...
Also you do realize that it's still February...correct?
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Yep! ^^ I wanted to do it early
7988617 mmm well that would help with the approvals on holiday lags. Plus I'm guessing you were waiting long enough.
So, yeah, you have a point there. ^_*
...still smart writing and story.
How long have you been working on it?
7988621
Had the idea last year. But I decided to just go for it and wrote it in one night. A huge amount of fun even if it was difficult!
7988622 ha
Well all the best writing either take a day or a bunch of years to do so I can relate.
Plus it more fun see what the hell is in your head than doing some soul searching and...finding out you're just a bagger at Walmart.
It works for some people to do that and write in a day. I can do that but...if I just let my mind completely take over it would probably end up; the mane 6 would most likely kill each other and the remains would kill the 3 princess and that would lead on til I completely go mental broke and insane.
...I did it once. Boy I'm never doing that again. And let's just say the friend that read it was maybe fine. *cough*
Soooo... How was your day?
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Not horrid, insomnia right now >.<
7988639 well happy I could keep you company.
Got to leave but thanks for the chat.
Darn you foals errand, after i read Lunas cursive part i went back to check what it ment and i saw what you did, you rickrolled us, you clever, clever girl
Well played, very well played.
Having edited this, this was an automatic favorite.
Glad to see everybody's reaction!
I got to the end of this fic, and I knew I had to share it with others. So I did. I featured it on episode 172 of my podcast, Pony 411.
So great job, you made me laugh. And made my friend groan.
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Thanks for featuring my story! I'm glad you liked it so much ^^
curse you for rick rolling us!! good story though
That is one rick roll I will happily accept, as it was hidden well and in a great story. Well done sir.
Goddammit!!!! I can't believe I got Rick Rolled again.
Smooth
Well this took me way too long to get to and read. And as the story finished I wondered at the cute little love story you've told with this one. Then the odd placement of Luna's suggestion to read the first word of each paragraph...
At first I thought I missed something like the letter that Twi sent to invite Luna, thinking there might be something just after that that might equate to being a really inefficient proposal... then I read it... Good show Foalsy, good show. I'd tip my hate if I hadn't been prohibited by the State of Massachusetts.
Did you seriously just Rick roll me?
Boi.
Here I was, reading, reading, reading... it was a fine read, at that, really. And then... that came: You should read the first word of each paragraph again.
And I thought to myself: ... wait, what?
And so, I did. And grinned like an idiot for a few minutes. Thank you for that.
9015421
You are quite welcome!
*facepalms* I did think some of Luna's word choices were odd, but I figured that was just her olden-days way of speaking, not an April's Fool's joke I'd only come across in July.
A nice story and a joke? In one package? Sold.
Adorable
DAAAAAAAAAAAANG!!!!
That’s so cool!!!
Come on everypony, LET’S SING!!!
HOW DID I KNOW!?!?!
YOU MAD GENIUS!!!!!
You, are a very clever Human Being. I didn't expect that!
Great Story by the Way!
For such a short and sweet fic, I never expected to feel such potent anguish and betrayal.