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Twilight and Luna have been dating for a few months now. With them both being so busy it was a good idea to just go for a walk together.

Ditching the guards was fun too.

First Published
28th Feb 2017
Last Modified
28th Feb 2017
#1 · 8w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

You glorious b@$£@&[). You got us good!

#2 · 8w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

My, Madam Foals, you had me simply rolling at the end there.:facehoof::trollestia:

#3 · 8w, 3d ago · · ·

I was gonna ask you what continuity this was part of, then I realised this was by you, not Jay-The-Brony. I actually thought to myself, 'You, sugar, are a failure.' :facehoof:

#4 · 8w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

made me smile,  as I read the story and I notice first word, that was great

#5 · 8w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Brilliantly done. :D

#6 · 8w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Ah you got me.  Though, tis a good song, at least.

#7 · 8w, 2d ago · 6 · ·

-After reading four paragraphs-

Hey wait, is this...

-Skims down a few more-

...no.

-Skims faster-

NO YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!

-Reads last line-

OH MY GOD REALLY??? Uuuuuuuuuuuuuugh.....

Saw it coming, but still well played.

#8 · 8w, 2d ago · 4 · ·

You magnificent genius, I hate you so much right now. :trollestia:

#10 · 8w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

You my good friend just got a favorite

#11 · 8w, 2d ago · 2 · ·

Oh, for crying out loud.:facehoof: I did not see that coming. LMFAO hard!:rainbowlaugh:

#12 · 8w, 2d ago · · ·

Damn...:rainbowderp:

I never see just a TwiLuna fluff that was not a mature one or an adventure one or one o those really long get together kinda things. I barely ever see a twiluna one shot.

I gonna cry.

It beautiful. ^_*

Neat story and clear writing

Also

Haha:rainbowlaugh:

You...you clever alicorn. You are a freaking genius. I envy you. :rainbowlaugh:

...

Also you do realize that it's still February...correct?:trollestia:

#13 · 8w, 2d ago · · ·

>>7988614

Yep! ^^ I wanted to do it early:trollestia:

#14 · 8w, 2d ago · · ·

>>7988617 mmm well that would help with the approvals on holiday lags. Plus I'm guessing you were waiting long enough.

So, yeah, you have a point there. ^_*

...still smart writing and story.

How long have you been working on it?

#15 · 8w, 2d ago · · ·

>>7988621

Had the idea last year. But I decided to just go for it and wrote it in one night. A huge amount of fun even if it was difficult!

#16 · 8w, 2d ago · · ·

>>7988622 ha

Well all the best writing either take a day or a bunch of years to do so I can relate.

Plus it more fun see what the hell is in your head than doing some soul searching and...finding out you're just a bagger at Walmart.

It works for some people to do that and write in a day. I can do that but...if I just let my mind completely take over it would probably end up; the mane 6 would most likely kill each other and the remains would kill the 3 princess and that would lead on til I completely go mental broke and insane.

...I did it once. Boy I'm never doing that again. And let's just say the friend that read it was maybe fine. *cough*

Soooo... How was your day?

#17 · 8w, 2d ago · · ·

>>7988634

Not horrid, insomnia right now >.<

#18 · 8w, 2d ago · · ·

>>7988639 well happy I could keep you company.

Got to leave but thanks for the chat.

#19 · 8w, 2d ago · 2 · ·

Darn you foals errand, after i read Lunas cursive part i went back to check what it ment and i saw what you did, you rickrolled us, you clever, clever girl :trollestia:

#20 · 8w, 17h ago · · ·

Well played, very well played.

#21 · 7w, 5d ago · · ·

>Noticed some things said lined up with a famous song

>"You should read the first word of each paragraph again."

>Does so

Huh, so that wasn't a coincidence.

Also brava, Foals. You have excellent taste in music.

#22 · 7w, 5d ago · · ·

Having edited this, this was an automatic favorite.

Glad to see everybody's reaction!

#23 · 6w, 3d ago · · ·

I got to the end of this fic, and I knew I had to share it with others. So I did. I featured it on episode 172 of my podcast, Pony 411.

So great job, you made me laugh. And made my friend groan.

#24 · 6w, 3d ago · · ·

>>8019048

Thanks for featuring my story! I'm glad you liked it so much ^^

#25 · 5w, 1d ago · · ·

curse you  for rick rolling us!! good story though

#26 · 4w, 1d ago · 2 · ·

That is one rick roll I will happily accept, as it was hidden well and in a great story. Well done sir.

#27 · 2w, 1d ago · · ·

“You should read the first word of each paragraph again."

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