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Christopher Plainfield, A college student who is in love with Guns, Swords, Anime and most of all, My Little Pony! Owns a motorcycle, trains in a small sword fighting group. Things are going well for him, until he gets teleported into Equestria during a thunderstorm. What will happen to the human? He's not dying, that's for sure. Time for him to make his mark on history!

This story takes place after the 'Princess Twilight' thingy so yeah. Enjoy!

Warning : Offensive language are used in this story

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 131 )

Great story so far keep it coming!

8016900 Umm, by Crossover...you mean my character meets your character right? I don't mind but I don't know how we're gonna pull that off. My story isn't really a 'displaced'? It's just some random guy gets teleported to Equestria. And another thing, I suck at writing. But...if you have a solution, I'll do it!

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I'll PM you or you PM me. You make a scenario where one of my characters meets yours and we can work from there.

8016972 Alright! You PM me with the scenario and the character and I'll try my best to write the chapter!

P:S: Tell me what your character act like!

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My first character is called Connor Smith and his personality is extremely unpredictable like Deadpool and he also has a voice in his head named Chad. Connor also is from Japan and is usually kind but if you mess with him or if he just feels like it, he can be a bit of a smartass and he enjoys pranking and trolling people.

My second character is Travis Smith, brother of Connor. He is cold and heartless. He is also a murderer and is responsible for the deaths of his own sister and Connor's girlfriend. His personality is just like his nature.

There are 3 things I live for: Guns, Knives, and My Little Pony....I already like this story! PS: This story is good. I ask for more...please... :pinkiesmile:

No offense but I like Princess Cadance more and yeah

8017324 The chapters are coming! :twilightsmile:

Damn. I cringed so hard, I almost fell off my chair.

8018102 I woke up, went to piss, checked fimfiction and saw this comment....

Well, sorry for your distaste for my story. Hopefully I can improve and make it 'less cringe'.

8018135 Bah, don't listen to him. This story is awesome! I'm just waiting for more...

Here, take my 1911.

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You may need it....but I'll want it back later...

8019302 Hahaha! Thanks dude. I'll use it wisely!

8020026 Look, I see you're trying to pick a fight. Not really in the mood, man. Please don't test me.

However, it's kinda cute that you're running around trying to insult stories and start fights when you haven't written anything of your own yet. :rainbowlaugh:

princess luna is always the best >:3 but I like them all there all cool to me :D

8020366 I always have a hard tide deciding which princess is best princess...it comes in waves: One part of the year, I like one princess....and then another part of the year, I like another. It's too hard to choose :fluttercry:

8023804 I will! And thanks for the favourite by the way! :pinkiehappy:

For some reason Connor and Travis smith remind me of the Hermes brothers from Percy Jackson.Is that a reference?They have the same first and last names

"Connor Smith, I, Christopher Plainfield challenge you to a SwordFight battle tomorrow after school. The winner gets to make a forfeit for the loser!" I bellowed towards him.

So, if you win...the loser needs to give up?

Once i was in a close enough distance, I started to slash at the dummy. Bits of hay started to fall down from the dummy as I continued my relentless attack. I kept slashing at the dummy and even did a few rolls to simulate I was dodging the dummy's attack.

How big does the dummy have to be if you need to roll to dodge its attacks? Goddamn Yhorm up in this bitch...

8025184 I don't know, why don't you ask the author? It's a crossover that I did.

Check him out : Crimson Blade79

8025185 :rainbowlaugh:

Might have made a few mistakes....I think

Nice chapter! Heh, had me laughing a little...this story is like crack....for my eyes...

Well, THAT didn't make sense...:ajsleepy:

why is he running.
The mane 6 will probably just ask questions

8025998 Really? You think so?

I would imagine them being afraid of him. They just saw him fight another human and they don't know what species he is...

Big cringe for me during the fighting.
Maybe you need to find the elements of cringe

8026172 One person cannot be friendship
One person cannot be cringe

Anyways, what the heck was that!? Why did you run!? And why are you in Equestria?" Rainbow asked me.

Why are you in Equestria, huh? Just cause I aint no poner means I shouldn't be here?!
Don't automatically assume I'm a criminal based on my race!
I'm not a Khajiit! :trollestia:

This is the beginning of an epic quest...

using pictures to describe the sword instead of actually telling us what the sword looks like

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However, it's kinda cute that you're running around trying to insult stories and start fights when you haven't written anything of your own yet.

You don't have to build a car to know when a car is poorly built. Same goes for story writing.

Urm, did he just blacked out?" Rainbow thought to herself. She look at the creature in front of her. It looked weird and funny. It was heavily injured though. She suddenly heard hooves behind her.
Did he just black out not blacked
GUESS! IS IT...JOHN? HOW ABOUT CENA
:facehoof: tun tana tuhhh tun tana tuhhh

8027959 Thanks for the tip!







tun tunah tuuuhhh

He looked towards me and roared an almighty roar.

As he filled your flesh with his claws....

Sry...couldn't resist that joke XD

I jumped towards the Minor. It caught him by surprise as I soared towards him. When I was near, I punched his snout with my fiery fist.
"FIRE DRAGON'S IRON FIST!" I shouted as my fist hit contact with his snout. He was sent flying backwards. As I was falling back to the ground, I couldn't do anything to soften my blow. I was out of energy and I was injured...all I could do, was wait for the impact...
One punchhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!

8030687 How the hell did you find that reference? Damn....

There is another anime reference...

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