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Doukzor


do I exist? Do you exist? Maybe neither of us exist, but instead simply are. crackers.

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As a shapeshifter deals with the risk of being found, they find themselves stuck in a group of refugees caught in a cavernous maze.

kudos to my irl friend Chloe for coming up with some of the prologue!~

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

Don't worry, my dude! I'm always watching you.:pinkiecrazy: Nice story btw. I really liked the part when Celestia fell off the balcony!

8136550 Thank you for the criticism! I'll try my best to apply it to later chapters :D It helps a bunch!~


8136683 definitely the best part :trollestia:
IT IS YOU BANANA!!! I HAD NOT NOTICED BEFORE!!!!!!

small update- 800+ words on next chapter done!
I got 500 done today!
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I REACHED A THOUSAND GUYS HOLY THAT WAS FAST. chapter might end quicker than I thought it would .-. Hardly got into the details, dang my skills are rusty, whatever skills I had
Also added a surprise in the chapter, that's not writing :trollestia:
2,000 words in... I need to end the chapter soon.... D:
2,800.......

Comment posted by Doukzor deleted May 13th, 2017

*Successfully beating and killing an innocent pony fills you with determination... literally!

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♪~ ᕕ(ᐛ)ᕗ

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