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This is a Rarijack shipfic, except it's not exactly a romance. It's a building romance, however it will end at a point and it will not be finished. It will be an open ending so you can build your own conclusion. The story is a one-shot and it is about Rarity and Applejack sharing their own eyes for detail.

Requested by my friend.

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Comments ( 19 )

Hmmm... It's not really shipping at all. No romance in it. Just two ponies realizing that they're different, and going with it. More friendshipping. I'd take off the "Romance" tag, because that's for blatant romance, not implied future. Unless you were going to continue this?

Yeah. Unless you're going to finish the story or continue it at least, you might as well take off the "romance" tag because all it is is two friends talking about how they are different. Nothing more, nothing less. And the conversation may need to be extended just a touch.

I think you should continue, pressing on the fact that they have different points of view: then the may quarrel about that, and in the end make peace learning something like respect for each other's opinions... and the story may close with a letter to princess celestia about what they learned :D.
Just sketching ideas, naturally you can do whatever you want :) Ooh, by the way, i enjoyed it

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Thank you

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I might continue this, but I'm not really sure. Truth be told, I started this about a moth ago, let it sit for a long time, and then finally finishing it half-assedly.

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I'll do that, I just felt the need to finish it. I'll probably work on it again in the nearish future

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I'll put that into concideration, read the above to know why. I mostly just wrote it because a friend requested it.

Also, and this is for everyone, I do take requests for a shipfic or whatever, I just need the ship and I'll do it. Only exception: Flutterdash. It's a personal reason.

1186927 Well, good luck! Hopefully you won't make it a "they both love each other because they accidentally kissed and then they fucked" kind of shipfic.

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Thanks, although, the hardest part of this for me is Rarity. I know nothing of fashion, I know nothing of stitching. I'm like Rarity personality-wise. Nothing like her interest and hobby-wise. And AJ, all you need to do is slap something apple related and you're good. But no, if I do a romance, it will be like my Flutterpie fic. Building romance. I also hate "AND THEN THEY FUCKED!" fics.

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Yeah, that's what I meant. I more or less hate fanfics which make the 2 main characters fall in love in seconds. Or clopfics with mindless sex. There's a reason why we created storylines.

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The thing is that people don't give a crap about storylines. And then there are the people who write terribly. I am a grammar nazi.

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I know how that feel, bro.
It's hard to find a story with a decent storyline, like Blue Angel, or University Days, and it's even harder to write a good storyline because many people only care about the mindless clop.

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Luckily, this isn't meant to be clop. I don't care if it is considered taboo, but I don't know horse anatomy, so if I do clop, it will be humanized.

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Yeah. I'm just saying, though. Most clopfics are just mindless ponies just banging each other to no end. I'd rather the clop be a bonus, not the entire damn story.

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So far, the only ones I've seen that are like that are: Of Maids and Mistresses, The Dark Apprentice, and University Days/Nights.

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Some of Raging Semi's fics are good too

1187709 Never mind, found him. It was all one word.
,,, 67 fics. Holy crap, that's a lot.

This fic is pretty good :heart:

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