Noble Troublemakers

Night Mist Peanut Butter, and Autum Breeze are famous for their outrageous shenanigans against the snobby ponies of nobility. They are hated by many snotty nobles and authorities alike, but loved by the humble and common citizens. So..... why haven't they been apprehended by the sisters of Day and Night, or the Council of Friendship? Well, only the story can answer that question.

Spoilers: This story is inspired by Disney's Robin Hood.

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Autum Breeze

Autum Breeze #1 · Feb 24th, 2017 · 2 · ·

well, aside from some grammar errors, such as this one:

such a fine by his side

a fine what? A fine WHAT?!

along with some other errors and missing words, not a bad start. leaves a lot of mystery, which has me interested.

Aren't you the least bit annoyed you were only mentioned in passing during this first chapter?

Me: *rolls my eyes* Whatever, Screwball. Sheesh, can't just stay in your own fic, can you?

Hey, you're the one who gave me the power to hop into another one of your stories; you should've known I'd find a loophole there. also, just when the heck will you get to the chapter i'm in in that one?

Me: *glares* Well, gee, thanks for spoiling that plot twist, even if nopony will be able to tell which fic you're talking about.

Celestia: I think somepony needs a nap. it is well past your bedtime, it being 9:30pm and all.

Me: *gives Celestia a deadpan look* Did you not read the part where it says i do my shenanigans with Mama at night?

Night--Mist