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Majin Syeekoh

We’ve got dents and we’ve got quirks, but it’s our flaws that make us work.


Twilight breaks into Starlight’s room to figure out why she locked it.

Now she’s in, and regretting every second of it.

Reading by Steven1992 and Scribbler!

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Comments ( 134 )

Umm wow :rainbowderp: was a very good read :rainbowkiss:

For such a...disturbing, shall we say premise, it's very funny and rather well done.

This was absolutely hilarious :rainbowlaugh:

Majin Syeekoh

7974016 Thanks!

7974026 Funny how Equestria works, isn’t it?

7974049 Not an unexpected reaction, to be honest.

7974052 Again, compliments are appreciated.:twilightsmile:

Majin Syeekoh

7974071 And thank you, as well!:pinkiehappy:

7974076 wow, that's a quick response :rainbowderp: and Your welcome:twilightsmile:

Majin Syeekoh

7974082 I get super nervous whenever I post a story.

Why would you be nervous? (I mean, I get the same way, but your stories are always awesome<3)

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7974113 Habit, I guess.

Hard to break ingrained habits.:twilightblush:

That was awesome.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

Majin Syeekoh

7974116 Glad to hear that.:twilightsmile:

:moustache: "Glad she caught you and not me and my stash of stuff..."
:duck: "I didn't make that plushy for nothing"
:pinkiegasp: "Look at those guns! Wowzers!"
:flutterrage: "Discord has video"!
:twilightoops: "AJ Spike wants all the gals" chugs the cider
:ajbemused: "more like all the mares get Spike..."
:facehoof: Face plants into open cider barrel.
:rainbowhuh: "Leave some for me!"

It's stupid but not a bad stupid. It's a good stupid. It made me crack a smile and it was entertaining. Good job

Majin Syeekoh

7974133 Smiles are always a goal I strive for.:yay:

I am greatly amused!

Majin Syeekoh

7974142 Good to hear.:ajsmug:

Haha, you perfectly captured Spike's naivety. :rainbowlaugh:

Majin Syeekoh

7974170 Yeah, Spike was super fun to write in this story.

Extreme tendencies of love expression.

Majin Syeekoh

7974245 Isn’t it sweet?:pinkiecrazy:

7974314 Yeah p much


Appropriate avatar.

Crazy minds think alike, I suppose. I'm glad Spike has someone who openly appreciates him. His fragile ego could use it.

You start a sentence with the word "now" three times in four paragraphs. Might wanna work on that.

Majin Syeekoh

7974367 It’s literally three different characters saying that, but I understand how that can seem repetitive in prose.

I’ll make sure to watch out for that in the future. Thank you for pointing out something that I can work on concerning my writing. I certainly appreciate that you took time out of your day to read through my story and point out something I can improve upon out of what I assume was an honest desire to help me.:twilightsmile:

Um. Excuse me for a second.

Freaking what?!

Majin Syeekoh

7974384 I’ll let you believe what you wish; it doesn’t affect the story either way.:scootangel:

7974404 It’s exactly what it looks like.:eeyup:

7974318 By sweet you mean dangerously pursuing the person thy love via perverted means then yes it's sweet.

Majin Syeekoh

7974424 I completely agree with the sentiment you just expressed.

Majin Syeekoh

7974467 I’m glad you enjoyed it for what it was.:twilightsmile:

And yes, my inclination is far more towards the making people laugh hemisphere, and failing that making them question my sanity.

Well, thanks. Now my dog is pissed at me cause I woke him up laughing.

Majin Syeekoh

7974510 Can’t please everyone, I guess.:unsuresweetie:

Glad you enjoyed it, though!

I laughed, and it's very much in line with the way you depict these characters and this world, and I absolutely love sociopathic Starlight when you write her that way, but...

All I could think of while reading this was that episode of Dif'rent Strokes with the bicycle man.

Majin Syeekoh

7974599 I will fully admit to coming up to within a nanometer of that line when writing this story.

I’m glad you were still able to find it humorous, though.

I'm calling the police.

I laughed because I'm a bad person.

I'm also slightly uncomfortable with myself for finding this hilarious.:twilightblush: That's good, so kudos.

Majin Syeekoh

7974663 I think Neil Gaiman once said something along the lines of we’re all horrible people pretending to be good people, so I assure you that you’re in good company.

Not what I expected.... It's better! :rainbowlaugh:

...So does Starlight make collages of ALL her friends?

Starlight's just lucky Twilight didn't see her collage... that's why it was placed in the closet.

This is soooo meta, it's like Twilight is looking at bronies and find them weird, but at the same time, they're not that weird, damn that sooo deep.

I also laughed. I don't know why but I laughed. Good job.

“Well, it’s not like I have control over how he positions himself while he’s asleep,”

That's too much informations, I don't want to hear more, plz have mercy. :pinkiecrazy:


Except for the ones of us that don't pretend...

Sanity questioned. But, is it my sanity or yours?

*hugs tight* Fantastic one shot Syeek!

I can't even :rainbowlaugh:...!

Jarkes #47 · Feb 24th, 2017 · · 1 ·

Since somehow no one's said it yet:

Goddamnit, Syeekoh.

7974026 Also, she just entered a locked room which she was asked not to enter.

Here I thought Glimglam was gonna chew Twilight out for breaking into her room and -that- was the boundary being broken.

I was wrong.

7975246 Was seriously expecting the same.

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