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Jongoji245


A fellow Brony, Bluthy (Don Bluth Fan), Dinosaur lover, G-Fan, and an animation student. I worked on fan fiction in Deviantart, and would like to submit them, revised, to you.


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It's been three months since it happened. Three months since Anon-a-Miss made hell out of everyone. Three months since Sunset Shimmer ran away from home. From her family. Further away from Equestria than before.

Knowing the truth too late, but feeling the time is still right, the Rainbooms, now with a human Twilight Sparkle, drag the Crusaders to the last known location to beg for Sunset's forgiveness. But things become awry, and our heroines and two dogs become stranded in a world where gods walk the earth and devils lurk beneath.


Not canon to the Jongojiverse, but part of a different alternate universe that occurs between an alternate version of "Friendship Games" and "Legend of Everfree." A crossover with more monster franchises than what's implied on the poster.

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(Looks at the cover art)
Looks like that giant demon monkey that endlessly chases you in Temple Run 2.

So did the truth come out already or still don't know?
More importanly will the shcool be told as well love to see Derpy and the others realize what they done.

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I'm taking the chance to assume that many, if not most, of the readers of this story also know of the comic this takes after via other stories or threads.

Otherwise, I'm not gonna spoil it. :ajsmug:

Before I read this, what is the Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

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what is the Gore tag for ?

Come Chapter 4 on, well, the Fourth of July.

how bad does it get ?

Watch any kaiju or dinosaur-related film and you get the drift.

Very impressive. Keep going on.

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Well the long description does say "takes place after an alternate version of Friendship Games..." :trixieshiftright:

Just what is that thing in the picture?

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I said this earlier and I'll say it again. It looks like the giant Demon Monkey that endlessly chases you in Temple Run 2.

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I can't tell you without spoiling the story. :eeyup:

“We couldn’t even find her journal,” Fluttershy adds, rubbing her arm slowly.

“Journal…?” The human Twilight mutters before flipping and reaching into her backpack. “You mean this one?”

Dash ~ You had it all this time AND YOU CHOSE NOW TO TELL US!? :twilightangry2:

Sci-Twi ~ :rainbowhuh: Well, I thought that this would be the best time to tell you all.

AJ ~ :facehoof: Christ above, Twilight!

So basically, all this time passes between winter break and the Friendship Games, and no one thought to check her apartment?:facehoof:

“Singapore.” He adds, though that only made them mumble. With a sigh, he takes out the keys to said tenants apartment. “Look, she paid three months worth of rent before leaving.”

I live in SG. So happy to see representation

>Rainbow Dash considers this to be an "awesome quest" to find Sunset
Rainbow no - is that all this is to you

bitch you know this was your fault too

Not sure I like this, took them that long to check her apartment, and they while act regretful doesn't seem sincere at all.
Wonder how Sunset react to taking them that long to check on her...sure a few punches to the face and stomachs will express it well enough.
then hoisting Sci Twi on to her shoulders to take her away from such lousy friends.

Double punch to Rainbow for her just thinking be a awesome quest.

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The more important question is... how did they stop Midnight Sparkle?

It was after all Sunset who went 'super saiyan' and actually dealt with turning Sci-Twi back to normal and stopped the rampant magic from turning the two worlds to swiss cheese.

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In this slight alternate universe, the Friendship Games continued normally aside from the magic draining. And thanks to quick intervention, Sci-Twi hasn't become Midnight Sparkle...

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After what happened, I'd keep my distance for that long before gathering the courage to go to her apartment.

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Wasn't mention or shown they felt that way or so, you need to add that, otherwise makes them out as Cold hearted B@%#*.

also it's not going to be i forgive you right here and now story is it?
I not for Sunset hating them don't get me wrong but do they desrve to be forgivn so easily?
No, they need to earn it back as well as everyone else, if she does decided to forgive them, she won't be trusting them so easly.
She may not even speak to them for a month or so, like Rainbow, apple Jack and Rarity sicne it was thier sisters and sister figure that framed her for the petty excuse fo being jealous.

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I've always felt that in this situation, the rainbooms would lose their magic. It's the magic of friendship and they betrayed their friendship with Sunset. They also went against their elements, so they wouldn't have any way to call upon it. It's one of the many issues I have with the Anon-a-Miss story.

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Wasn't mention or shown they felt that way or so, you need to add that, otherwise makes them out as Cold hearted B@%#*.

I don't have to. Try thinking this as a scar; it's just a wound, and once it heals and fades you don't feel pain, but you still remember how it got there.

also it's not going to be an "I forgive you right here and now story is it"?
I not for Sunset hating them don't get me wrong but do they deserve to be forgiven so easily?
No, they need to earn it back as well as everyone else, if she does decided to forgive them, she won't be trusting them so easily.
She may not even speak to them for a month or so, like Rainbow, apple Jack, and Rarity since it was their sisters and sister figure that framed her for the petty excuse fo being jealous.

You basically just summarized many Aftermath Anon-a-Miss stories; better than what we got in the actual comic, but it's how we do it. For me, it's tapping to my roots: before becoming a Brony.

“Hey,” Princess Twilight wraps her arm around her counterpart “I’ve been through that too, and take it from me, you won’t regret having such good friends.”

If Twilight is referring to the Rainbooms, I'm surprised she considers them "good friends", especially when they basically cast Sunset aside with no real evidence of her being Anon-a-miss.

So is this story taking elements of Kong '05 & Skull Island '17?

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Even we had friends that have gone off the deep end. But as long as we learn from our mistakes, we become stronger.

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And more... :trixieshiftright: Much more.

“Hey,” Princess Twilight wraps her arm around her counterpart “I’ve been through that too, and take it from me, you won’t regret having such good friends.”

Reminds me....
Why are are they on this adventure again?

I believe I recognize most of the beasts in here, and some rather famous lines and scenes from movies and TV shows, but could you still provide a list and pictures for each one, please?

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List now available in Q&A listed in Long Description.

"My name is Sunset Shimmer. For three months, I've been stranded on an island with only one goal: survive...."

I had to do it; don't hate me.

Best story I've been reading can't wait for the rest!

Guitar and resin glove....

Oh you ARE such a tease!

Adagio...YOU FU@KED UP:pinkiehappy:.........and doomed them all:fluttercry::applejackconfused:
Let's hope that Sunset will remember this
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Awesome! Death Ghidorah and was that Mothra Leo? Man the appearances that keep popping up are insane! I know this story is almost over but I really hope you can stretch it out further.

One final roar from the menace and the jungle is silent again. As the victorious moth comes in for a landing at the village, the Rainbooms carefully crawl over to Princess Twilight. As they wait for solid ground, happiness fills them up before they join together in a big hug.

Awwwwww hug time:twilightsheepish::yay::ajsmug:
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Alright i'm very confused, who died?! I'm talking about the Dazzlings did one die or was it two?!
And forgive her....HHHHMMMMMMMMMMM...Well guess she speaking fr the surving dazzling as well.

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I have updated the Q&A in the long description.

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FINALLY found the blasted thing. Ok got my answers but I think Sunset went too far, on saying everyone would forgive her.
You had her speak for Sonata, who just lost her fellow sirens.
Stupider is Susnet forgiving them so easily yes yes life and death struggle blah blah blah. Still think Susnet should forgive the Rainbooms.
The CMC guess she can forgive, mayeb theys tarted it, but the Rainbooms and the school itself finished it.

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Okay, now I feel silly for not checking the Q&A before posting. I did notice there wasn't any mention of 3 heads, which shold have clued me in. I've been a fan of Matt Frank's work since '06 and loved his Death Garugaru design. (I personally can't STAND how they changed it in the dub to Desghidorah instead of the original credit of DEATH GHIDORAH). Also Mothra '92 is one of my all-time favorite incarnations of her character,

Great story, bro. I like the references from Peter Jackson's King Kong, Kong: Skull Island and possibly other kaiju movies.

By the way, the scene where Pinkie gets sucked by that mosquito, isn't that a reference to 'Land of the Lost'?

Oh, yeah! Godzilla, Rodan, Mothra and King Ghidorah.

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:eeyup: Yup.


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Desghidorah is probably a Romanization of Desughidrah (how he is called in Japan) and so to be faithful (somewhat) when dubbing, they called him as such instead of Death Ghidorah.

The Dazzlings can't be really dead. Are they? :fluttershysad:

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