Afterword (Optional to read)
No, this isn't a legitimate chapter. It's just to explain a couple things.
Some of you might've enjoyed this story, others, maybe not. But, this was based on something that was happening to me. Thank Celestia, it stopped. She came back. I guess I was over-reacting. But, when you have so many ponies walk out on you, it's really all you can expect. I love this mare too much, and I don't want to lose her. She's my everything.
Anyways, if you spot errors in the story, leave a comment below and tell me what you thought of the story.
Thanks for the read!
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you made me cry!
I was so sad...
Fluttershy agrees with me!
Still, very emotional, and very well written.
That middle paragraph...
That made the story.
Nice! I enjoyed this; it was an entertaining read. I noticed a couple of errors, but nothing extreme. I'm a little confused as to why this isn't tagged with "Romance", though. Even if romance doesn't actually happen, you're describing incredibly romantic feelings in this, which I think merits a "Romance" tag.
867707 I'll add that right now, thanks. Must've forgot it.
i felt nothing, until i realized that this actually happened to you. Thank celestia she's back
868888 It's really hard to think you lose someone who's spent so much time with you. I'm glad she's back, as well.
Reading the initial story: Woah... That's heavy...
Reading that this actually happened to you: OH GOD WHY?!
869514 I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was hoping to let others feel my emotions. I'd rather express my emotions, than bottle them in. It helps me vent.
How did she come back? did you go all apeshit in all? hahaha lol
im such a asshole
871197I didnt cry but that was my fault .I had to stop reading in the middle to have breakfeast but I was on the verge of tears
.At first I thought that she was a figment of your imagenation beacuse it said they didnt know you were with her in the first place , then I read the second chapter and decided I have been reading phycological dark fics for to long.
871612 I was actually very happy. I didn't get mad. She thought I would be, but, it was the opposite. I'm too deeply in love with this mare to even think I would yell at her, or go apeshit.
871828 Nah, she's real. 100%. Mare of my dreams.
871881Heh , ive been ready WAAAAY to many romance tragedy!Heh Heh....
Oh and I wish you two the best .
871958 Thanks. I just like to find new ways to express myself. I'd rather put it in words, than take it out on people. Sometimes fictional art is best wrote on emotions.
871969I know the feeling of letting out your emotions in words as well.It'sa rather pleasent feeling.
On a totally unrelated topic TWILIGHT IS BEST PONY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
871980 Hah. I like Rainbow Dash over most of the ponies. But, my favourite background pony would be Vinyl Scratch. Just for the rocking personality everybrony gave her.
871985Yeah , whats up with the big argument over her eye color?
872001 I don't know. I just say red, because that's how it's been since it started. Lol.
872037Same here.
871985 ps thanks for the follow, i cant belive you the goat are following me!
goat= greastest off all time
872712 I'm a GOAT? How so? :3
Pretty great read! I'll enjoy more from you if you post more.
872773 Glad you enjoyed it.
872715GΘΔ†
872870 I asked 'how so?'.
>Doesn't get answers.
I have failed life. :c
872954 beacuse you are good at writing, i think i learned how to speel with a can of alphabetti spaghetti
is the somepony, Roseluck?
873334 Nah, the somepony is beyond a name.
873006 LOL. XD Well, Spell check + editors = win.
Sigh. This shit here man. It's just heartbreaking.
This is what makes the story so fucking great.
No explanation leaving you with your own fears and thoughts to speculate what happened and the fact that it ended on such a heavy note, just makes this so perfect.
I didn't cry man, but I felt my heart sink knowing there'd be no resolution.
Unfortunately I'm too young to really feel much from this and connect with the character.
Good story though.
This happens to me often. Me and a girl whohave known eachother fora whil go out,then she leaves me!
However, THEY NEVER COME BACK!!!!!! WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG EITHME