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Jumping Jack


A single guy who loves to play video games, reads and writes stories about colorful ponies. I have returned with new ideas.

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Ghost Pepper dreams of many things. Dreams of being a noble in Manehatten's bureaucratic table. Or a royal knight, tasked with defending the throne and the princess. Or perhaps finding the one pony he can call a friend. He dreams big. Yet when he awakens, he finds himself struggling with the everyday menial hum drum tasks of cleaning the orphanage's halls, rooms and only getting scraps of the food from the other colts and fillies.

Ghost Pepper dreams big. But a wakening nightmare haunts him. One that he can't help but finding himself in over and over. If he is to overcome this nightmare, he not only requires the help of three curious fillies, but a royal alicorn who walks the Dream Plane.


Now with cover art by Little Tigress!

Chapters (24)
Comments ( 11 )

Great start, can hardly wait for more!

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
5:15_2/24/2017

Good to see that this story is back in the works.

Planning on getting around to finally finishing something for once XD

Oh, wow. Graverobbing, so low of them, the scum!

You missed a symbol on the center closing tag, and the second half of the chapter is all centered

11651322
Thanks for the point out. I was out of town so didn't get to it. Fixed it

Found this story via the art on Equestria Daily. :twilightsmile:
Looking forward to checking it out!

11655961
That's Little Tigress for you. And my story cover art got featured in Equestria Daily? That's pretty neat.

What’s the slice of life tag for?

11675859
Because out of dreams, orphans are just trying to get adopted. I originally wanted to do simple stuff, but I uhh... found that actually gave me major writer's block. I actually intended to inspire this off of a movie called The Devil's Backbone, but in a way that isn't what that movie is about and more of the idea concept that orphans are trying to live their best with a struggling adult caretaker against harsh realities. But my world building self, wanted to delve a bit into the dream worlds since I do lucid dream from time to time. That, and it's an excuse to write in some of my favorite characters from the show. I might end up editing the tags again though.

This is very beautifully written, thank you for completing this.

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