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wolfbain


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A weird dream this is, why did I write this? I have no idea, also, why wouldn't I write this?

This was an English short story but I have revised some of it... So, enjoy?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

878609

The point of that is?

878639

:rainbowlaugh: it's cool dude, but was there any reason behind that?

878651
It's better than "first" right?

878639

:rainbowlaugh: Indeed it is my friend, indeed it is

878658 Damnit man, I was trying to take a drink when I saw that. x'D

Well, what can I say after reading that? It was certainly a strange pair of dreams, just like you said in the description, and it was definitely quite creepy. The dreams are very vague, which is good in that it leaves the reader wanting to know more about what is going on. I guess the two dreams must be related in some way, perhaps caused by the same malevolent force; either that, or both Twilight and Rarity ate too much chocolate before bed. It's a shame, then, that these were uploaded so long ago and it doesn't look like any sort of clarity will be coming. I'd happily read four more chapters like these if they gradually revealed what's going on and how they're connected.

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