Bakesale
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Pretty enjoyable and almost romantic if you can ignore the context that Coco's a slave and she really has no choice. So, she lets it happen and doesn't fight so long as she can live comfortably with her Master who treats her well in bed.
Hey. Bakesale. I'm one of the admins of The Real Fall of Equestria Fan Group, and we were wondering if we could add your story to the group.
it isn't that bad... still needs more polish.. but the idea is still good.
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Sure! Feel free.
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Great, thanks.
This honestly isn't bad. Don't let the down votes bind you-Fall isn't the most popular series, and I bet that a lot of them didn't even read it. I've seen good Fall stories that have a massive amount of down votes simply because they a Fall story.
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What he said.
Pretty much any story with even the slightest hint of 'coercion' in it, or anything somebody can point a hoof at and call 'dubious' in terms of consent, is going to garner downvotes just for having that sort of content in it at all. Any 'mature' rated story usually gets a few right off the bat too, and if you add FoE to the mix, you're going to get even more. Personally I'd prefer the voting bar be grayed out entirely until your browser logs that you have at least opened one chapter of the story you're claiming to share your opinion on, since sharing your opinion without knowledge of what you're voting on harms the entire community - it makes it harder for readers to find legitimate opinions on things they want to read. If you haven't read at least enough of what you're voting on to tell us what you did or did not like about the individual story in question, your vote isn't really helpful to anybody (thus it might be of greater value to the community not to vote at all).
I think you did fine, Bakie. Adding in the mirror scene helped to put the main character in better perspective as well, and you can tell a steamy story pretty well in a short space. Stay the course
Before I read it, what is the Dark tag for?
And how bad does it get ?
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Are you asking if there will be stuff not covered in the description or something?
7980018 How Dark does it get ?
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That doesn't answer my question. Besides, you already asked that.
7980054 I jest want to know if the Dark tag is jest for the rap ?
Very nice, look forward to more.
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I was planning on introducing psychological torture and breeding, though I was debating whether I should stick with that or going so far as to detail experiences with mares who have been "blanked". I'm open to suggestions!