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Chrome Masquerade


Dashing do-gooder dog? Accomplished, affable aeronaut? Big-time brony? Lazy lackluster lackwit? You decide!

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Interesting, very interesting. Can't wait to see where things go from here.

Twilight should know about Celestia's sister, normally, unless she has bad memory
I mean with all that knowledge you would think that she would forget things, but she never does, Twilight OP

Hmm.... you have my attention. I am quite interested in seeing where this story takes our heroes.

7962743 Like i said before, I'm not even sure yet.

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Well... I've been planning out a Vampire fic of my own... maybe we could share ideas via PM?:duck:

I like what I see. Let's see where it goes from here.

i look forwad to it :heart:and nice work

:twilightsmile:

8045861 It's an idea that was knocking around in my head for a while. Saw it in a dream at one point. I haven't had any more dreams like that lately, so i might just have to play by ear.

I would recommend a proofreader my friend, there are several glaring spelling and grammatical errors in such a short chapter. You have a great premise and story flow but with so many glaring errors it could turn away serious readers, and frankly this deserves better than that. :twilightsmile:

8072652 I was going to change the i's to I's but i forgot. Hold on.... :facehoof:

As such, I believe that your alias should be Alexandria, which means Defender..”
“For thee, We believe the alias... Valeria. Would fit nicely. It means Defender.”

You've given Defender twice as an alias.

8095242 My mistake.Let me fix that error. Valeria actually means Strength.
fix'd.

i'm not sure where this will go but i want to follow its trail

8478886 i'm hoping i come up with more sometime soon. These flashes of inspiration are just KILLING me, here!

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maybe instead of goind episode by episode you can skip a couple and maybe have vamponies be natural enemies to changlings

8478921
okay i look forward to reading more of the story

8478922 Knock on wood; i look forward to it too.

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Intelligence isn't OP. Fighting is OP

Jack clarified. “Well, you can still be destroyed, but forget the books and movies. Garlic? Worthless. Some of us even enjoy it. A cross? Pfft! Shove it right up their plots! A stake? Only if it catches you in the heart, then it's just paralyzing. Unless of course your head is removed afterwards. Running water? No problem. I bathe or go swimming. Occasionally.

So their not indestructIble their just ageless.

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Sorry to disappoint, but this is a story that progresses as i receive inspiration. It doesn't happen a lot, unfortunately.

nice very nice:eeyup: and you live:yay::yay::yay:

Are there any plans to continue this biting story??

Round 2 was about to begin.

Round 2........ FIGHT!

Ok will a good idea your rushing it what the hell is moonkissed abd why are they so ok with it. You rushed it and it kind of killed it for me.

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I drew a lot of inspiration from this story.

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are you going to update it soon?

9370889
Sorry, but I have been more than somewhat sick for the past little while. I STILL HAVEN'T recovered fully.

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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No such luck. I haven't thought of any new ideas yet. I plan to continue it eventually as soon as I know how to proceed.

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Was it you who gave the like to my rather fitting comment?

Comment posted by Edguy0009 deleted Aug 10th, 2020

Now, the Brujah of old followed the Olympian Ideal (also known as Entelechy). This means that they believ'd in perfection of body and mind, and so trained both relentlessly. They also believed strongly in family mentality. If thou did'st mess with one of the family of a Brujah, thou would'st face the wrath of all of them.”

It'd be interesting if she had said clan's blood before her transformation but was diluted thanks to time.

Next Luna turned to Rainbow Dash. “Loyal maiden Dash, thou hast the bloodlines of the Toreador primarily and the Lasombra secondarily, yes? Thy powers will be very similar to Applejack's, save for the added benefit of Domination and control over the very shadows, known as Obtenebration.”

“If it came to it, I'd definitely go with Twilight's decision. I can tell that this is not the kind of power to be playing pranks with.” Rainbow stated, earning a proud smile from the lavender mare.

I dunno my OC before his transformation and later ascension used his power of shadows to play pranks/ troll and still does it even afterwords even though frequency has dropped a lot to the point he never does it.

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Fair enough. Supposedly they get even harder to kill over time, though.

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I mean who would want to be ageless(Besides Villains)? Id gladly take being indestructible but agelessness? No.

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