 The universe has fallen into the crutches  of the Jark Matter Shogunate and the inhabitants cry out in sorrow. the last planet yet to be conquered, Earth. Jark Matters power has proven to be greater than the magical power of friendship blessed to 7 young girls. With the threat of the universe being trapped in the clutches of evil the earth has one last chance to fight...
Teenagers with attitude
Given the power of the stars, nine heroes make the last stand to free all 88 star systems. the rebellion has started among the cosmos, with a little luck and the power of friendship this team of unlikely heroes will become the shining stars everyone will look upon and give hope to. Â
Our Friendship will take on the universe, KITA!
(Crossover of Uchuu sentai Kyuranger)
Great job!
Oy, wrong universe for the Kita
8173848 it's high school kids, space, and friendship, I think the Kita is alowed
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Ooooh~ I assume the other 4 members will show up as extra heroes later?
8174243 got to start small
(Should I say it?) Um, I think you mean "break" instead of "brake" in the chapter title. Though I liked it, I almost didn't read it—quickly edit-sweep at least the story's description before posting to not scare away potential readers with "this grammar will be unreadable" impressions (I found 9 errors in the description alone not counting term translation choices).
Also, though I have other hopes, this is probably a lot like what Power Rangers would do with Kyuranger if it used the season.
8174436 yeah I had a power rangers adaptation in mind as I wrote this
Interesting story. Have to ask the picture has 5 hands. Who is the fifth character?
8174695 what do you mean
I think "braek" is the least of the author's worries. Jack Matter I can understand, preferring Jark myself, but a "shogunot"? Yeah, I'd highly recommend you get an editor. Until then, as much as I enjoy Kyuranger so far, I can't, won't vote up or down.
8182260 I actually do, they just didn't do it for the description
Or your own profile, for that (jark) matter, haha.
Seriously though, the simple fact that the description -and- chapter name are still unedited does not speak well for how much you seem to care about the quality of your work. That doesn't mean you don't care, mind you, but that it -looks- that way. Impressions are important, and if a story's synopsis and such looks sloppy, that doesn't inspire much confidence in the actual story.
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SUPER STAR PREDICTIONS
Poison Star = ???
Trick Star = Trixie Lulamoon(?)
Silent Star = Maud
Speed Star = Rainbow Dash (Assuming Raptor isn't in here too)
Dragon Ma-Star = Xiao Longbow (Because he happens to still be in here)
Big Star = Button Mash(?)
Also, you totally got the Link-Tama from Kamen Rider Fourze.
8183071 yeah there may be a lot of stuff from forze
I have an idea who the silver kyuranger will be.
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I bet you'll never guess who's behind the mask
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I'm only hoping it's none of the human 7 and Timber. Im hoping for one of the shadow 5 or even Trixie.
One thing i like is for the human 7 not knowing who they are. I mean they already have their powers and they deal with equestria related problems.
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Don't worry I have a rule that non of the main characters can be rangers in any of my Fics. And timber is not worthy to be a ranger
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This may be spoiling but i can't help to think of this scene when the human 7 find out(if they find out):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPTiZTCRN9o
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Guy with green hair in the forth movie. He's like flash but worst
What are the odds that your team will meet the original team?
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Rather slim
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What about an event similair to what happened in episode 18 of the show?
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That may happen
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Besides, I could only imagine how each member of the team would react to their counterparts.
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I was debating linking that video
Somewhat short. I didn't think it would be Big Mac good one. Still thinking who could be the rest rangers(hoping one shadowbolt either of the shadow 5 or a background one....maybe cold forcast).
One thing im glad again i say it is the human 7 to be not involved as in other stories, and it would be interesting if Aria has to return to the school why in an odd way the other 4 defend her.
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Well we still have 3 rangers to go
What is this a crossover of?
Um, wouldn't Rarity and Rainbow have seen Ditzy transform into the Pink Kyuranger? So wouldn't they know the identity of one of the Kyurangers?
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Uchuu sentai kyuranger. or if you don't know what senti is its power rangers
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both of them were in a position where they weren't able so see the full battle unfold.
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Convenient!
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As well Koguma Skyblue and Houo Soldier.
You know, considering gold and silvers relationship in the actual show, I was worried you were gonna make Timber and Gloriosa into them. Glad you didn't
. I also considered Trixie for gold since its the trick star, but I like what you did with Time Turner. I have no clue who the silver ranger could be, but I'm looking forward to finding out.
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oh don't worry, timber is not worthy to be a ranger. if he was a reoccurring character he would be something along the lines of Bulk from the original MMPR
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. I'd pay to see that.
Little bit of an error, the title should've been "Gold Experience".
Forgot an A
Other than that, great chapter. But I have a question. Is the team members are based from the ones found in Derpibooru? I saw the picture and the members are almost the same, save from Dorado.
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Yes that was my first draft for the team, Yellow and silver are the only ones that changed
Okay, after rereading this chapter and going over everything we know about the Silver Ranger, I've come up with three things I think leads to their identity.
1. It's a girl.
2. They have something to do with the colour silver, which could mean silver or gray skin or clothing.
3. They keep pushing up their visor, meaning they may be used to doing that action with glasses.
Is the Silver Ranger Silver Spoon and we're witnessing a Blue Turbo Ranger height thing here?"
8434276 WAIT! The stadium. I was thinking sports but if it's a concert stadium. glasses and might have something to do with music...VINYL, it's Vinyl isn't it.
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I cant say who she is but your closer then the silver spoon guess
8434584 Octavia or Sonata is the Silver Kyuranger and also Kyuranger is a AU sentai which means Praxis and the Krybots doesn't exist since Jack Matter would had destroyed the person whom created the Krybots and Praxis won't be the one we know from Dekaranger/Power Rangers SPD.
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Well my story is a AU itself, and even thaw Jark Matter took everything over dosent mean there aren't other criminals and black markets out there un affiliated with Jark matter
8449593 Ok, but What about my guess for silver?
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Well I can definitely say this, I won't have two sirens on the same team. But don't worry I promise we'll be seeming who's behind the mask soon
8449657 Any luck picking Koguma Skyblue and Houo Soldier?
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Yes but they will remain a secret
8450128 Cool