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Something isn't right in the north of Equestria. There are meteorological disturbances, ships going missing, and a port village that has been abandoned for a lengthy period of time. Blueberry Frost and a new recruit are sent north to investigate with the help of a commodore and two Grandmaster monster hunters. Their investigations of the strange white orbs overtaking the sea show that there is much more here than just weather disturbances.


A non-canon crossover collaboration special made with Tarbtano.

Written in collaboration by The Psychopath and Tarbtano
Godzilla Junior property of Toho Company Ltd.
My Little Pony Friendship is Magic by Hasbro Studios
Nyum-Bunet, Zealos, Spiral Tooth, and Commodore Boulder by Psychopath
Blueberry Frost owned and copyrighted by Sword-of-Akasha and licensed by Shadows of Shattered Dreams, all rights reserved

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Comments ( 8 )

Wow, I have to say that I love this combination of The Bridge and Monster Hunter. Spiral Tooth seems like an interesting character and Zealous is one perceptive Diamond Dog if she managed to figure out that Junior was different. Blueberry Frost shone on this chapter due to how you made her look friendly yet professional and commanding when she gave orders on how to fight the Nyum-Bunet. Awesome story worthy of a fav.

Very interesting. It would be cool to see illustrations of these new characters, but the descriptions are good.

You may want to check the links in the description.

Aside from some proofreading, I liked this little chapter. The opening description of the shore-side village, and the brief exposition of why Blubes and Junior were there, were done very nicely.

I don't know jack about Monster Hunter, but it wasn't necessary. I may have gotten some more references, but not knowing didn't slow me down at all.

7959095 Damnit. I thought I fixed them. Once again.


7959963 But...we did proof-read them. Tarb had his editor do this...Any examples?


7959088 Yes. It was totally ALL me. I did ALL the work.gameinformer.com/cfs-filesystemfile.ashx/__key/CommunityServer-Components-UserFiles/00-00-55-19-52-Attached+Files/4572.tumblr_5F00_lrocgkLILx1qfgjtno1_5F00_500.gif

7960030 I'll send them in a PM. I'm not comfortable putting them where everyone can see. Strikes me as dickish.

7960221 *shrugs* I don't care. Shows people I take this as extremely important aspects of writing, which I do.

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