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The Psychopath


I adopted the name of my most beloved creation and have gone about spreading the word of the Illogic. Tell me, are Illogic and chaos the same thing?

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Part 1 of 2

Something isn't right in the north of Equestria. There are meteorological disturbances, ships going missing, and a port village that has been abandoned for a lengthy period of time. Blueberry Frost and a new recruit are sent north to investigate with the help of a commodore and two Grandmaster monster hunters. Their investigations of the strange white orbs overtaking the sea show that there is much more here than just weather disturbances.


A non-canon crossover collaboration special made with Tarbtano.

Written in collaboration by The Psychopath and Tarbtano
Godzilla Junior property of Toho Company Ltd.
My Little Pony Friendship is Magic by Hasbro Studios
Nyum-Bunet, Zealos, Spiral Tooth, and Commodore Boulder by Psychopath
Blueberry Frost owned and copyrighted by Sword-of-Akasha and licensed by Shadows of Shattered Dreams, all rights reserved

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Comments ( 21 )

Wow, I have to say that I love this combination of The Bridge and Monster Hunter. Spiral Tooth seems like an interesting character and Zealous is one perceptive Diamond Dog if she managed to figure out that Junior was different. Blueberry Frost shone on this chapter due to how you made her look friendly yet professional and commanding when she gave orders on how to fight the Nyum-Bunet. Awesome story worthy of a fav.

Very interesting. It would be cool to see illustrations of these new characters, but the descriptions are good.

You may want to check the links in the description.

Aside from some proofreading, I liked this little chapter. The opening description of the shore-side village, and the brief exposition of why Blubes and Junior were there, were done very nicely.

I don't know jack about Monster Hunter, but it wasn't necessary. I may have gotten some more references, but not knowing didn't slow me down at all.

7959095 Damnit. I thought I fixed them. Once again.


7959963 But...we did proof-read them. Tarb had his editor do this...Any examples?


7959088 Yes. It was totally ALL me. I did ALL the work.gameinformer.com/cfs-filesystemfile.ashx/__key/CommunityServer-Components-UserFiles/00-00-55-19-52-Attached+Files/4572.tumblr_5F00_lrocgkLILx1qfgjtno1_5F00_500.gif

7960030 I'll send them in a PM. I'm not comfortable putting them where everyone can see. Strikes me as dickish.

7960221 *shrugs* I don't care. Shows people I take this as extremely important aspects of writing, which I do.

I know this is old but screw it 10 out of 10 even if is a part 1

9042889
What do you mean by 'even if it is a part one'?

9042967 it’s a great story because I tells a lot even if it’s just part1 thats what I meant

9043913
Ah. Tarbtano and I had to decide where to cut the story in half so that both parts have an equal amount of events and information occurring within them.

9043942
Well I’ll tell you this man that was the best idea on his and your part i honestly hope you do more

9044736
It was my idea to do a collab with him so I could improve my usage of giant monsters. Let's just say it took a long time at first because of a misunderstanding on his part.

I actually do want to do another, but he's preoccupied at the moment, unfortunately.

2 things I want to know because I’m way to curious. one what was the misunderstanding if you don’t mind telling. Two what was the other story gonna be about was it another hunter’s: the bridge or was it gonna be a different story.


Note I apologize for my grammar

9044893
He thought I was asking him to write a story with the Nyum-Bunet in it and became understandably angry (As I've had people ask me to do the same thing). He also thought I wanted the Nyum-Bunet to win against Godzilla.

As for the other story, yes. It would've been another Hunters: The Bridge; This time with my Yuhis.

9044911
Wich Kaiju where you gonna pit it up against or was it gonna be Godzilla again?

9044915
I wanted to use Godzilla, as he's the staple, but also Mothra Lea and possibly another Kaiju, like Rhodan or Anguirus. Mothra Lea is supposed to be a pivotal part of the fight against the Yuhis as she'll notice something odd with it. It also won't be your typical kaiju battle and was going to use their transformed forms more at the start.

9044992
That’s not a bad idea to be honest well I hope you do another collab with tarbtano because I really want to see how the story plays out.

9045017
I'd love to do it, but as I said; He's occupied.

9045032
Yeah but at the moment so I can happen at any time all we have to do is wait.

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