Fanfic writer, gamer, and whatever other labels I'm forgetting.
The arrival of a traveling magician seems to be marked by some strange occurrences in Ponyville. As these events start to strain the friendships of each pony that holds an Element of Harmony, two ponies start to come closer and closer together.
This is a continuation of Epiphany that reads well on it's own. Stars Applejack, Pinkie Pie, and friendshipping across the board with everypony else.
Read: Applepie incomming!
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Nice to see this story finally got on this site.
Anyways, good story overall, my only issue is that one of the reasons I started reading this story was because the tags said there would be APPLE PIE! Several chapters later and it just barely starts surfacing. Oh well, keep up the good work, hope to see an update sometime before 2012.
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One need not worry, it basically becomes the focus after chapter 8.
Gotta build up you know.
Nothing like a nice, slow, ship. Nice to see this on FimFic. This fic is particularly important to me because not only is it very good, but it's also the first fanfic I ever read. Thanks for that.
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Wow, I'm honored. I'm glad you still like it so much in lieu of other far more epic projects.
I Love slow shipping it builds up the characters relationship and is overall more satisfying to see, for me at least. Keep up the good work and take as much time as you need to make it great.... but not to long. May you always have inspiration to keep you driving forward.
No new updates, but at least I can read it on something OTHER than dA and their stupid bandwidth and CPU sucking "Refreshs three different ads every 30 seconds" setup...
Really loving this story and can't wait to see more! The new, straight-haired Pinkie is kinda creepy...though maybe that's because of the fact that she's suddenly referred to as Pinkamina rather than Pinkie. The rest is awesome though.
I really can not wait for the next chapter; all 42k words so far have been amazing. All of my Spike Staches to you!
nice one... together with Epiphany this is turning out to be one long story line, but where does it go from here ? i can't wait for more
Loving this so far! Keep it up!
This is one of the first fanfics I started, it's nice to see it updating again. Thanks!
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No probs. Sorry it took so long.
Hm, I'm actually really liking this story.
You seem to handle these numerous sub-plots pretty well without having the whole thing seem too "heavy" to read, the characters are pretty well-written, and I'm loving how it revolves around AJ. Also, that Aisle character and the little touch of shipping are anything but intrusive. (which can usually be a problem with OCs and shipping)
Can't wait to see an update!
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Thank you! I'm glad to hear I'm at least handling the multiple plot-curves well, that's always been a worry as I write this, but I tend to think I've resolve them enough that they aren't weighing down the entire story.
>Aile
Yay after so long its updating again thanks this is one of the first few fanfics I started to read i was getting worried it would never update.
yay
APPLEPIE
I am so glad you updated, good job 
Nice story so far. I do hope you keep writing this story!
Came here for the Applepie.
stayed for the story.
Good story so far. Keep up te good work!
This chapter reminds me of Avatar: The Last aribender
I hope you plan on continuing this. This is good stuff, and I want to know what'll happen.
Me: Found what looks like an awesome ApplePie ship! *Goes to read it*
When my eyes see: "On Hiatus"
Didn't this used to have a Trixie character tag? Rather odd to see it vanish.
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I do not believe I ever had a Trixie tag...
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Must be my mind playing tricks on me, then.
It lives! Wow, you're not joking, that is almost a whole year between chapters. AJ took one heck of a nap!
Ooh, I'm so excited to see this moving again! This is one of the stories that got me started writing Stubborn as Ponies. Huzzah for the return of the most delicious ship!
Did Applejack and Pinkie eat that whole cake? I mean, I know Pinkie has been established to possess extradimensional space in her stomach, but still, that cake sounded like it was bigger than the both of them.
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Hmm! No, they didn't. I guess I thought that was implied when AJ said she couldn't take it home.
2373812 Ah, I think maybe I missed that line.
Nice to see movement again.
It is a common experience that a problem difficult at night is resolved in the morning after the committee of sleep has worked on it.
- John Steinbeck
Honestly... i have no idea what is going on right now. when i have time i need to re-read the story.
i love the whole arc and am glad this is moving forward :)
You went an entire year between updates.
That said, I've seen and waited through a lot worse. Just... keep your muse well fed from now on, ok?
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TRUST ME
I KNOW
I read the whole thing straight and I like what you've done so far. Do you know when the next update'll be?
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At... some point... in the near future kind of.
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Why is this cancelled? I was really enjoying it
*Finishes rereading 2472504's Right/Faith*
Hmm... I wonder how Out of the Blue is doing....
*Sees the dreaded Canceled tag*
...right. Ok. Change of plans.
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