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Disavowed ASH
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Disavowed ASH
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I think that this is written in a really interesting way. I hope that you will continue the story. I would like to see what happens next. :)
Nicely done once more man, can't wait to see what happens next. This is looking great!
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Thank you for the encuragement, don't worry more is coming soon on this limited story. (In about a day.) And editing will be done within the following two weeks. I'll add Menace of the Mines in the credits as soon as he is done.
(Sorry Menace.)
8021924 Cool! I can't wait to read what happened next. :)
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Fantastic, can't wait dude.
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First chapter edited by Menace of the Mines. And wow, I see whre the dislikes came from now.
8026793 Ignore the dislikes. I think the story is really great. Keep on writing it. :)
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There's always bound to be some dislikers around bud, just ignore em and keep on writing awesome stuff like this
8033810 Give about a week, between me editing some of the dialogue, and Menace of the Mines editing the rest, it should take that long. I apologize for the inconvinience.
The next chapter in "The Symphony of Canterlot", and the next chapter here should come out on around the same day.
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To those wondering what happened. I deleted the previous version of "Unforgivable Sins" because once I finished the revision and adding of dramatic flare, the second version was much better.
So to all thinking that I took a whole month to update, not really. I just didn't know that deleting the chapter would mean deleting the comments too.
I already apologized to the previous commenters via Personal Message. (Except you Steel Sabre, sorry.)
Please enjoy to fic.
Well done work Ash, well done work.
Looking forward to the next chapter, don't have much to comment on tbh other then well done.
Nicely done. I've been wanting to read a good noir or noir-esque story lately.
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i will be updated at the same time as the rest of my stories. I hope to cram two new chapters for this one and The Symphony of Canterlot during Spring Break.
Good story; is it partially inspired by The Dresden Files? Haven't gotten around to reading them, but I get a bit of that flavor with the noir meets occult magical realism vibe! Think my favorite scene was his trip to the 'Medicine' shop.
Last sections of the second chapter felt a tad rushed, but otherwise no complaints. Tracking in case you ever pick this up again, but no pressure!
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Wow. All I did was give him that one crup-stomp moment where he basically intimidates his way into crucial information.
Anyway, while this is partially abandoned, this is an older adventure of this character back when he came out of living in the streets due to depression and PTSD induced nightmares from his time fighting with the Galic Foreign Legion in Zebrica. He basically is 23 here. The story in which I first write him is a year into the show and I am trying to finish as quickly as possible real world obstacles and all. I'll update soon don't worry. I'll hand over the next chapter in that story within two days to my editor and give it two or three days its published after that.
While I like your comparison I thought about Hellblazer, Hellboy, the B.P.R.D. Horror Comics, the Conan the Barbarian books, Queen of K'n-Yan novel,The King in Yellow story collection and the works of H.P. Lovecraft and Clark Ashton Smith. This is because I, even with ponies tend to write more bizarre, violent, and darkly than Jim Butcher's flare. Though I will admit that I do like his work, haven't read much outside the first two Dresden Files novels though and that was years ago.
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Hellblazer is also something came to mind; good list of inspirations there, excellent taste! Looking forward to more, will check out the rest of your work when I can! Trying to whittle down my backlog without much success, but could use a break from the nonstop clop I usually read! Love the gloomy atmosphere.