• Member Since 6th Feb, 2013
  • offline last seen Last Wednesday

TheNewYorkBrony


The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.

E
Source

Spike does not like hugs. And he definitely does not like sleeping next to Twilight. At all.

A story of compromising and growing up.

Written for Everfree Northwest Scribblefest 2017

Chapters (1)
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!
Comments ( 37 )

Cute cute cute :twilightsmile::heart:

Fluffy and adorable.

QUIKLY I NEED A DEFIBULATER THE CUTENESS IS TOO MUCH!!!!
agggh!!!
*keels over clutching chest...*
*medic runs in and uses the pattles*

CLEAR!!
*jolts up*
thank you...
overall good story...

"A story of comprising and growing up."

Seriously?

i liked it, but i don't feel satisfied. hmm.

Cute and soft fanfic for the morning.

This is so cute! I loved it!^^

Here's a solution, why didn't Cadence just make Rarity in love with Spike like she did with those arguing ponies earlier? That way he can act however he wants and still be with Rarity.

7988663 because that's immoral lol

Aww, that was cute. And love the cover. Silfoe?

7988671

Are you sure you don't mean "compromising"?

7988785 ah autocorrect strikes again

7988672

That's never stopped her before...

7988663 Cadence can't make ponies fall in love with each other, she can only use the love that already exists between them. This was explained years ago.

7989172 I just hope familial love is different than the OTHER love.... can you imagine if she did that to a pair of arguing siblings?

7989346 I can, but I try not to XD

7989172
Oh when was that?

Spike I like ya buddy buuut your like 12 maybe 15 even by pony standards you are no where near a man. And given this story i'd put you at 11 or 8.

7989899 At Bronycon after the Season 2 finale, I believe. They wanted to make it clear, since a LOT of people thought that Cadence could just up and mind control ponies with her magic.

This was very sweet! :twilightsmile:

Now you know me.

:pinkiegasp: cuddling not canoodling !:facehoof:

orig02.deviantart.net/a30d/f/2017/055/2/7/fashionably_resting_by_hillbe-db0abdt.jpg

:twilightoops: canoodling up a creek without a paddle :raritystarry:

:rainbowlaugh: snuggly

:moustache: I was the size of King Kong... once or twice,

:ajbemused: wuts a Kong?

He didn't need to be coddled, or cuddled or cradled or any or word that began with the letter ‘c’ that implied babying.

What about [Warning: NSWF]"clopping"? Technically that is some kind of baby-making.

Applejack rolled her eyes. “Don't you worry none, Spike. Rainbow’s just being a jerk. In fact, Mac still sleeps with his raggedy doll. Ain't nothing shameful about it.”
Rainbow Dash fell out of her seat. “Was that supposed to make him feel better?” she asked. “That doesn't exactly make him look more manly!”

Rainbow, if you adress a letter to "man", I'm sure Big Mac will receive it.
And you will find his picture in a dictionary of you search for "manly".
Right?


Found an small error:

since pony kind really didn't have

"Ponykind" is one word.
Also, it's Cadance, not Cadence.

This was a good read although somewhat on the tell side of things. Characters were believable which isn't always the case.

It feels a little clumsy in some areas, but otherwise, not bad. :twilightsmile:

Well this one was definitely worth reading :3

Faved.

btw best of luck on that contest! ^^

7990380
That's hilarious. Awful, but hilarious. :rainbowlaugh:

tooo cuuute!!!!

chock full of D'awwws

To quote C. S. Lewis, "When I became a man I put away childish things, including the fear of childishness and the desire to be very grown up." Spike learned a valuable lesson here, even if it took him two sleepless weeks to learn it. The writing has some rough edges, but this was still a sweet story. Thank you for it.

Soo cute. Spike and Twilight are one of my favourite mother and child relationship. Great job :pinkiehappy:

This was cute. I liked it.

Login or register to comment
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!