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The fuck did I just read.
The irony of that cover picture is astounding.
1443477 Some crazy idea I had.
1443582 I know, that's why i picked it.
= Fluttershy, what would we do on Earth (Just a little Fixin' for my bro.)
Has a lot of errors but other than that it's a good story
1446915 thx bro
1447836 ya ill do some self editing. thx
1451429Cool
What's up with the screwed up disliked button obsessively it must be broken why else would the like/dislike ratio be this messed up
1541608 It isn't messed up, people hate this story...for no reason....
THEY SHOULD REMOVE THAT BUCKING BUTTON. IT CRUSHES SPIRITS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(don't worry, IRL i'm fine.)
1670751 The story isn't a repost. It's only just been added to the TWE's folders, that's all.
1542664 Well, this fic has been flagged by the TWE, so expect a couple of people who will explain exactly why you're getting the downvotes.
Oh the irony.
You know what I like? Dark. Hell, my profile picture is Tim Burton. But this is just bad. The grammar is fucked up, Fluttershy is OOC as hell, and not to mention it's stories like this that make people think that bronies are fucked up.
i.chzbgr.com/completestore/2011/1/16/6b5aa2cd-5a47-4d3a-b751-1af6217de3a1.jpg
And neither am I.
well, guess what, I DON"T GIVE A FUCK other than the time I spent typing this.1670832 I typed the damn thing in like 2 hours without an editor, it was my second fanfic, and maybe if somepony geve me something other than negativity, I'd be insprired to write better!
1670764 If I may ask, what is the TWE?
1671032 *ahem*
The Train Wreck Explorers!
1671099
So basically, this a group of people who bring attention to bad stories, and make them worse with hate comments, then make it look like they're doing good on this site? Because what just happened here didn't help me at all, it only brought unwanted attention to what would've otherwise been a forgotten story.
At first when I saw that people were commenting on my story, I got exited, then I realized that it was not only one person hating it, but an organized group who take pride in destroying my self esteem!
You're either illiterate or stupid and you sure aint illiterate.EDIT: By that I mean I'm about to help.FUTUREDIT: People of the future, have you ever had one of those moments when you wake up at your keyboard with a pounding headache and half a glass of 'black Russian' sitting next to you. That's my excuse for my rampant assholism in this comment and all the ones that follow. I am sorry.
1671188
SURE, LET'S HELP THE ALREADY BUTTHURT AUTHOR BY CALLING HIM STUPID AND/OR ILLITERATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU KIND SIR, THAT HELPS ALOT!!!!!!!!!
1671194
New author mistake: Using 'Royal Capserlock Voice' to show emphasis. Try merely adding an exclamation point or, if you really must, bold.
EDIT: A single exclamation point.
1671194
At least you're honest about being butthurt.
Seems a bit redundant and it should be 'Earth' because she's not quoting anything we know about.
Twilight recoiled in horror at the use of her name. You don't need to reaffirm the subject every time you start a new sentence. Saying 'she' after the first sentence is perfectly fine.
I read ahead a bit after this and I can assure you, there is every reason to dislike this story. It's unnecessary, massively OOC, badly paced and juvenile.
Everyone starts somewhere. Write more, just don't publish all of it.
1671220>>1671214 THAT'S NOT AN AUTHOR'S MISTAKE THAT'S THE OBVIOUS RESULT THAT YOU GET WHEN YOU'VE PISSED SOMEPONY OFF!
IF IT WAS CRITICSM, IT WOULDN'T MAKE ME THIS ANGRY!!
Now that i'm somewhat calmed down, could you please tell me what's wrong with my story WITHOUT insulting it or me.
1671274 I have, 1671272, but I failed to be nice. It's just not a cool story bro.
1671274
Some...SomePONY?!
How old are you? And why are you using show terms as if they actually apply to real life?
1671283
Because I'm a diehard obsessive of this show.
1671281 Sorry, the above comment was posted as you posted yours, you did what I asked before I asked the question, thank you.
1671303
Mhm...You realize that if you want to get anywhere being an author, you have to stay at a distance from your work, right? If someone attacks your work, you can't always be defensive. You have to learn to take it from an neutral perspective.
1671303
No problem. Just so you know, one of those things that results in downvote-bombardment is when authors react to criticism, TWE or otherwise, like a kilo of lithium being thrown into a pool.
1671316 WRONG, I learned that the TWE are total dicks that care more about a good read than other ponies' feelings. I'va always taken criticism well, but as I said, what happened before this wasn't criticism, it was organized hate.
1671333
Your feelings aren't supposed to be attached to your story in the first place. And of course they care about a good read, EVERYONE WHO READS A FANFICTION OR ANYTHING IN GENERAL DOES!
No one should be asked to give a damn about your feelings.
1671333 Not a single pony has been hurt by the TWE. In fact, I'm pretty sure that we rescued a couple from abusive authors.
But seriously, mate, people come to this site for good reads. The author's feeling's shouldn't even be considered when reading or criticizing a story. That stays on their user pages and in groups. If you're going to be the kind of author who stereotypes TWE critics as bucknorris then I pity you.
1671355 Hey, look! You're using caps lock, even though that's a comment and has nothing to to with his writing I'm going to say that it makes you a bad author anyway. You see what just happened there? That's what your "Orginization" said to me. Doesn't make sense does it?
1671395
Wrong, what the reviewer said was, and I quote
This has nothing to do with the comment section, and simply states that caps are not for emphasis. They are understood as shouts, I was shouting at you.
Writing has rules too, you know.
The level of butthurt in this thread. It's sickening.
1671099>>1671188>>1671355 Overall, I have gained nothing from this experience. This story is finished, no matter how many errors are in it. That's why it reads 'complete' when you view it. Thus I'm finished with it as well, I'm going to continue with my other stories and move on from this. I give a half-hearted thank you to the TWE for attempting to provide criticism, but I realize that you're nothing but a bunch of trolls, even if you don't know it, that's what you are. As I recieve actual critisism (like what NobodyPro did at the end of this) I will grow as an author, and my writing will improve. I, personally think that this wave of comments did nothing but put a roadblock in front of that goal, as now those dislikes can now be seen throughout the site. Your approach to critism should be revised, and at least not directly insult the author. No matter what, when you insult someone directly, that person is going to think you're talking about more than just their story, and that's when your 'critisism' isn't appreciated.
1671435 Exactly.
1671480
They could be seen throughout the site the moment they showed up, bro. It's not like your story was hidden from the rest of the site until it went into the group.
1671480
You know, I don't say this to most people, in fact, I try to avoid using it all together. But you really are a dumbass, and it's clear no amount of criticism will help you improve. So how about when you actually make a good fic, then you can talk down to us about being "Trolls".
Peace, I'm out. I don't deal with morons of this calibur, we have harsher members for that.
1671511 Actually, it almost was. Very little people saw this story after the day of it's release, and it was left at a deserved 9 dislikes. NOW since this 'TWE' came in here it has 19 dislikes, and a really noticeable 35+ thread about how bad it is. Either way, this is rediculous.
1671547
A lot of that has been in response to you instantly throwing a hissy fit when people said your story wasn't so good. You brought this on yourself, pal.
1671553 GO FUCK YOURSELF! LEAVE ME ALONE!
1671570
Cheers to you too, pal.
1671132 Actually, you are incorrect. Yes, they will highlight the flaws of the story, and some of the reviewers aren't so nice. But we have a system. We point out what's wrong, AND WE FIX IT. We will explain how to improve the writing, new strategies, etc.
Thing is, I haven't seen any TWE reviewers in here yet. They have a special signature, which only authorized members like me are allowed to use. So, most of the stuff probably WAS pure negativity. Just don't associate THOSE people with us TWE. We are the German people, and the haters are the Nazis. (A somewhat effective comparison.)
-Winter Storm
TWE's Author Support Shock Trooper
Edit: If you want to see EXACTLY who is an official TWE reviewer, just visit the groups main page. The list of names is up front.
Also, please dont take the fact that your story showed up in the archives as an attempt to single you out. They go in merely based on the number of downvotes to upvotes. If it was 50/50, it would be unlikely for it to appear. So please don't feel that its an attack on you or your writing. We just want to make it better.
1671547
If it's bad... then people will dislike it.
1671513
Should we get Mr. Ignorable?
1671634
Do it.
Do it
Do it
Do it!
1671636>>1671634>>1671628 JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!!!
AND YOU WONDER WHY I CALLED YOU TROLLS?
1671636
I did.
Hopefully he's here soon.
1671654
All I said was a fact. That was not even close to a troll. If you stopped being close minded, and didn't get angry at everything anyone has said, then you could improve as an author. Obviously, some people don't like your story. There has to be a reason.
Let them tell you, and the world will be happier.
1671654 ......Okay, maybe this is getting out of hand. These people are probably trying to convince you (in increasingly derogatory terms) that your story is in complete juxtaposition with your beliefs. My suggestion is just agreeing with them at face value and carrying on. You'll be a better person for it. Oh, and take down the story, it's a stain on your reputation.
1671654
Because you're using the term incorrectly. Am I being trolled?
1671654
You do realise that crying like this will only make things worse?
Accept the fact that you brought most of this butthurt on yourself for being such a little bitch in the first place and we can all move on. Or you can respond to this and I can actually eviscerate your story and your ego at the same time. The choice is yours and I leave it entirely in your hands. But remember, respond to this message and you're really going to be enterring a world of hurt.
>Evil Homer - TWE's Tactical Tactless Nuke