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Liquidfirest0rm


I write about lesbian ponies. Don't like it? Move along... Nuff said.

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Two fighter pilots, Alex Shepherd and Alan Cross, run into a freak storm during practice maneuvers in the Kuwati Desert. Suddenly finding themselves in a very green area, they run into trouble shortly after Alex finds an oddly colored equine in the nearby forest. This is the story of their arrival in a new world, a world that may challenge every thing they have come to believe. Dark tag added for violence (very light dark)

Edit: Currently undergoing rewrite process. Going to be going back and fixing errors and pacing issues as well as flushing out areas I found weren't up to my standards. Re-reading will be optional as main plot points will remain as they were.
Edit: New temporary cover art until I get mine finished. Found at http://broni.es/thread-3592.html using google.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 21 )

OH COME THE **** ON!

I thought this was longer when i started reading, MOAR! :flutterrage:

I mean.... if you want. :fluttershyouch:

You might want to give that first sentence another read through, it seemed a little oddly worded.

Thanks there were definitely a few extra words in there, good eye. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by dashdlkashd deleted Jun 22nd, 2017

1985721
It does at least in the Army don't know about the Navy.

Comment posted by dashdlkashd deleted Jun 22nd, 2017

1985809 That is a F-18 Hornet in the picture and those are strickly used by the Navy and the Air Force and Navy hate each other so unless I read somewhere where it says Air Force I am sticking with Navy.

1986621
They are Air Force. The picture was a random find on the internet. :twilightblush:

i like this it not often you find story where a human couple end up in equestria

I'm no expert on military aviation but I'm pretty sure you got some names mixed up. I think what you did is combine two names of separate aircraft, the F-15 Eagle and the F/A-18E/F Super Hornet. Both are awesome but are not the same. Just my thoughts.

flyingfox

Comment posted by dashdlkashd deleted Jun 22nd, 2017

2000329
Major derp on my part. :facehoof: I changed the number but not the name. :twilightsheepish:

2000335
He only had enough time for an 'Oh shit' moment before he got hit, also Alex is the only one with bullets left. He lost his second magazine in the Everfree.

Comment posted by dashdlkashd deleted Jun 22nd, 2017

2009908
Because by time he put two and two together it was too late. (Rhetorical answer)

Nice story, when is next chapter coming out?

LOL

This one was pretty good! :ajsmug::yay::eeyup: < KEKEKEKE

I like this story, but I wish the chapters were longer so that I could keep on reading. :fluttershysad:

Not liking the romance bit (I oppose homosexuality), but otherwise good.

Now that's what you call a cliffhanger.

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