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TheVClaw


I'm a shameless neckbeard who has a knack for writing a LOT of smut. I have an Official Patreon page (Patreon.com/TheVClaw), and I also take commissions to help support myself as a freelance writer.

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What kind of sick freak likes tickle porn?

me

(Before reading) Weirdo

7946252 Yeah, I know.

Happy (early) Valentine's Day :pinkiehappy:

Welp that was a thing. Lordy.

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The things people do for love.

Just my flavor, though I wish there was a sequel.

Wow, M/M tickle torture porn? And it has a good storyline beyond porn-for-porn's sake? Yes please!

Wellll where to start?

For one while I'm not super into the feather tickling idea like *some* people are I still found this story very detailed. I didn't feel an overwhelming lustful desire but it certainly did have my attention at all times. What surprised me was your attention to detail being like just about every tickle story I've come across in the slow build up and ending in usually begging for pleasure coming from the tickling. Shining was a bit OOC with him being a dom but it fit for the story's sake. I really enjoyed your descriptions, too. For somebody who claims not to have a tickle kink they sure are just handing me a million ideas.

My only criticism is not being rougher with tickling. Go to paintbrushes and hairbrushes and forks and magically created claws.

Also write a prequel story with him and Spike "experimenting" like you hinted too. I bet Spike is the one who taught Shining to be a big dom.

Let's see what this has in store. Mmmyes. Vintage M/M tickling porn, Chateau de VClaw '17, very good year... ooh, Sombra/Shining? Heh. I approve. I approve very much. :pinkiehappy:

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There's more Shining/Sombra stuff here if you're curious~

I saw this in the popular stories, and I was super hyped up to read it, because I am a sucker for a tickle fics.

And damn, you sure know how to tease and break a pony. I mean, begging to be tickled to be brought to orgasm? How humiliating to come to terms with your own fetish, especially to say 'tickle', which I know a lot of tickle nuts have trouble saying out loud.

While feathers are a bit overused and I would've liked to have seen different tickle tools, say, paint brushes, toothbrushes, or making him more sensitive with baby oil. I can't really fault you for using the tried and true.

Also I'd love to see Shining and Spike in one of those 'anatomy lessons'

Speaking of anatomy lessons, male equines actually pleasure, and in times of stress comfort, themselves by slapping their erect cock against the underside of their barrel by flexing certain muscles. So, technically, even though he was fully restrained and hornless, Sombra didn't need Shining to get relief, he just really wanted those feathers.:rainbowwild:

I though the twist that Shining let Sombra finish simply to get a DNA sample, not because he was being "nice", was a masterful touch.

Well, I'm impressed. Hoof tickling is a bit of a niche that not many people write about. There's a few small details that could be added here and there but otherwise well done.

the king must be avenged! pleas make a part 2 of the king having his Revenge:heart:

I do hope you plan on doing that to discord...just saying :D

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If anything, Discord would be the one tickling~

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It wouldn't be wrong for him to be the submissive one~

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Would you mind make discord a submissive one? I do have an idea about the story but I don't know how to write it.

how many times can you wright the same story lol....

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To be fair, this one has Shining as the Dom instead of Sombra. :P

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I don't know about other people, but I could do with some more submissive Sombra. Though I imagine in many cases it would involve dubious consent.

Which I also find kinda hot. <.<;; Maybe we should make him the Royal couple's pet while we're at it...

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To be fair, I kinda wrote a story of that theme already in SFW form: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/451237/discords-apology-gift

This is one of the reasons why Sombra is my second favorite tickle victim. :rainbowwild:

Pharynx would have to be my first.

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