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A new PInball Machine had just arrived at Sugarcube Corner. Pinkie, being her hyperactive self just had to have a go at it. What madness will ensue? What treasure will be found? More importantly, can Pinkie beat Sweetie Belle’s high score?
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Don't think there's ever been a pinball fic before, good job.
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hey Bricklayer,
you read my mind
ever since I was a young foal I played the silve ball
from Ponyville to Canterlot I must have played them all
but I ain't seen anything like her in any amusement hall
that deaf dumb and blind mare sure plays a mean pinball.
(apologies to Pete and company-wink)
A very in character and fun story, I really liked this.
That's the fastest I've ever hit that like button.
Somewhere, Linkara is screaming.
I somehow just realized that we're not getting any traditional pinball. And I have no problems with that.
Fun story.
Seriously, like, seriously how did you make a game of pinball into an epic fantasy adventure? I...It's a first, definitely a first. And Pinkie was pretty much perfect- not too outrageously random, but just enough that she was plenty amusing in the face of terror and danger.
And that Dramatic ending though!
Couple of punctuation slips and things, but nothing to detract from the story. Good show, me likey!
And then my favourite line:
The world's most convincing speech of bravery ever
With her high score in pinball, do you think Sweetie Belle might wind up qualifying for a spot in the Guinness Book of World Records for the world's highest pinball score?
Nicely done, fun read.
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