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DwarvishPony


Human. Writer. Bearded. Feel free to chat with me.

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Equestria has a new alicorn!

While this raises many questions amongst the residents of Ponyville, this mysterious stranger seems to care less about the reactions of other ponies. Instead, she chooses to focus her attention on a certain yellow pegasus.

But where exactly did this alicorn come from? Why is she in Ponyville? And why can't she seem to remember her own name?


An entry for the 15th F*** This Prompt contest.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

This was an interesting little read... I don't know what to make of it though. Have a thumb, for my inconsiderate thoughts... just kidding, it was a fascinating read, I kinda wish to see how an Alicorn OC done by you would look like. I am not saying, or asking, you to make a story on one, just that I wish to see an Alicorn OC from you.

Frankly, I down voted immediately. Why? Because waaaaaay too many authors write in alicorns with memory problems. And just like the pic, they're all black and red. Honestly, you need to think along the more original lines, such as a pony of your own making. Don't spawn off an idea that has....forgive the phrase...beaten a dead horse

7944371

They were writing the story for a prompt. The whole point is that it is a highly over-done story idea. The challenge is to make it good. At least read the full synopsis before you summarily make decisions about stories.

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By Faust,

This.....

This.....

is....A work of genius.

Reading this, was a mixture of reading in total awe, and laughing my flank off.

To the Author, Fantastically well done.

The Monk

Good job getting this fic out. I shall read with interest :pinkiesmile:

7944371 The description is a bit misleading. This is definitely not your average "alicorn OC with memory problems" story. You’re missing out by judging it without reading.

7947987
To be fair, the description was meant to mislead. Though in hindsight I probably lost a number of potential readers because of it. Oh, well. Live and learn, right?

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