In the beginning of the class, the teacher announces a new transfer student, Imagine my surprise that the new student is a pony. And what's worse? nobody else seems to notice it... aaaand it's going to sit at my side, great!
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Profanities. period after prepared. Eat should be ate
8380305
fixed
What tense is this s in?
8380334
present, but in some parts, it tends to jump to past tense
8380340
Please try to keep it in one tense
I like it(MOSTLY) Reminds me of the time when my class got a transfer student and he speaks Spanish.
BTW needs improvement on the tenses.
8387504
I'll try to fix it when able, and thanks for the fav
Very rough and undetailed, but showing promise. Work on adding imagery and detail to your scenes and you will go far.
you know I was expecting more with that ending
Dont mess with magic people!
Leave it to the professionals