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We were somewhere around Ponyville, on the edge of the Everfree, when the Poison Joke began to take hold.

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For the first time in a dozen years, the rare and beautiful Northern Iridescent Flutterspiders are making their great migration south, and there is no way Fluttershy is going to miss it. Setting up camp in a secluded mountain valley, she prepares for three days of watching and sketching and communing with nature.

But Fluttershy quickly discovers that she's not alone, as a dark and imposing figure steps out of distant legend and into her campsite. There to view the migration as well, the ancient alicorn also finds something unexpected, a beauty and kindness that touch his soul and awaken desires that had slept deep within for millennia. Can he express his feelings to the lovely young pegasus without frightening her away?

Written for F*** THIS PROMPT #15

Thanks to deadrose for the cover image.

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Comments ( 8 )

Thanks for the entry and getting it out so quickly. I shall read with interest :twilightsmile:

Thanks for sharing this piece. I was suddenly reminded that I needed to read more of your works. After thoroughly enjoying the last one, this one looks to be another enticing story. :twilightsmile:

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I have to say, don't get your expectations up for this one. I wrote it in a rush for a prompt with a one-week deadline, so it's not up to the same quality as the previous two. I'm strongly considering re-writing most of it.

That said, there are a few passages in it that still make me giggle insanely.

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My own works are not above reproach with respect to the minor errors that I spotted in it thus far. I wasn't really analyzing it for the minutiae with regards to the scenes you developed, so I enjoyed it nonetheless. Thanks for the read. :pinkiesmile:

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Glad you enjoyed it despite the flaws. :yay:

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Hey, most of the people on this site aren't that strict with what they like.

Actually, I have a strong passion for continuing my development as a writer, and you've been one of the people I have looked up. I've been reading a lot to make improvement, and I wish I had read more of your content during that time. :yay:

Alack, there are only so many hours in the day. :fluttershysad:

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