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An ancient demon like creature has awoken from a long slumber. Now the only thing that can save Equestria may be as dangerous as the demon they are trying to stop.
This story was originally a collab with HMXTaylor Lee. He's on hiatus right now, but it's dedicated to him all the same.
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Hmm.... I've only read slice of life/ drama style stories from you before, so an adventure story will be something new. The start seems to be interesting; I am getting a very Lord of the Rings like vibe from the adventure setup. (Item of power, ultimate "evil", epic quest to the ends of the world, potential for the corruption of the bearer by the item.) One thing I would wonder going forward in the story would be, are the rest of the mane six just going to be kept out of the loop on this? Twilight being the Princess of Friendship and the mane 6 all being connected through that power, I would think Celestia would want all of them there to support Rarity in this endeavor. Look forward to seeing more in the future.
7931536 given the unbelievably lackluster response this has gotten, I'm tempted to cancel it.
7931566 Well, whatever you feel you need to do I'll still keep a look out for whatever you put out next.
7931576 thanks, I try not to worry about numbers, and I'm largely successful, but so far this isn't even a blip on anyone's radar.
This looks promising. I am very interested to see Twilight's interactions with Nightmarity. Many fics who deserve praise are sadly blips in people's radar, lost in a sea of other fanfics. Please don't give up, continue.
I'm liking this can't for the next chapter or chapters....which ever many you put out.
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Also, they recently added Nightmare Rarity character tag if you want to add it.
Really looking forward to what this fic brings
Interesting enough premise. Too early to tell what I think about it since we haven't gotten into the meat of things. Still, you've got my attention.
I'm kinda wondering about Spike, though. This really feels like something that he would be able to help with, what with his friendship with Rarity. (I also have not read the Nightmare Rarity comics.) He doesn't have a character tag, though, so I would normally think that he wouldn't be involved. But then what was the point of the focus he got right at the beginning? It almost begs to have him show up later in the story. I'm just curious, is all.
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Maybe the princesses consider Spike is too young to be sent on such dangerous quest.
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Oh, I'm not questioning that. I'm just wondering why the narrative started by focusing on Spike when it doesn't look like he'll be too relevant. I might be jumping to conclusions, though.
nice,
i can't wait to read more.
Hmm... it does have some issues - like, how come Starswirl was more powerful than Twilight is right now? I would understand the need for the helm if the goal was killing this thing instead of sealing it again, and Dark power was the answer because... maybe only forces similar to what created it have a good enough chance of destroying it...
But if it's sealing it, then Twilight as she is should be enough, because if TWILIGHT can't learn the spell fast enough, cast it with power enough, then using Rarity is much less plausible even if you cover the requirements for power by using Nightmare Moon.
Also, despite what happens, this should have some sort of repercussions for Celestia, because - regardless of whether or not her hoof was forced, she DID cross a line with Twilight.
7933929 what's that old saying: Love conquers all. I suspect spike will have big role to play by the end
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fear not. I haven't abandoned this entirely it's just been shelved. I've got some free time coming up. Maybe I'll add another chapter to this.
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yeah, i know how i want the story to go, but the effort in writing it just isn't there
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despair not, this story may be revived, there's some scenes I really want to write for it