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It's not easy confessing to the one you love you love them. That's how Fluttershy, Spike, Discord, and Applejack feel. So these unlikely pairs team up to help the other confess their true feelings. Little do they realize they would undergo a great journey before professing to their hearts' desire.

A Fluttercord and Applespike fanfic.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 40 )

I smell shenanigans

wow can't wait for the next chapter.

Not a bad story, I'm eager to see what happens next. I just hope that Celestia doesn't lead A.J. and Discord to their crushes before they get to their destination.

Also, are Discord and Concordia siblings? I mean, sure they sound the same and that doesn't really mean that they are related. But, it was just a thought.

hope to see more soon

There were a few spelling errors, but it was still pretty good. I also like the touch about Discord and Concordia,that could bring some tension later. However, i was thinking, since Concordia protects the golden apple tree, maybe she could give some sort of test to Spike and Fluttershy. You know, something to prove their worth, something similar to Discord's tricks in the labyrinth, but instead of corruption, the tests make the two heroes show the strength and goodness of their character.

7939627 What were the spelling mistakes?

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Well, I can't remember all of them, but one is where Discord calls Fluttershy "Formable" instead of "Formidable".

Please update as soon as you can.

Here we go again....

Squee! This looks like things are about to get awesome! I'm really hoping that either a battle or a test will take place to prove whether their love is true and hopefully convince Concordia to let them be. (BTW, I like how one minute she's willing to just let them pick an apple, and the next minute, she won't let them leave once she finds out who it's for.)

Concordia is... creating disharmony... someone must stop her!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Curse you Concordia! You shall be thwarted!

I hope they find a way to fix all their problems.

Please update soon, I'm eager to see what happens next!

Yay! :fluttershyouch: An update!

dang it i can double like this thing :derpytongue2:

I'm glad it's all over, but yeah, this ending is a bit rushed. But hey, all's well that ends well.

:rainbowlaugh: Love the reaction moments to Fluttershy's speed. :rainbowkiss: :heart:

Am I detecting jealousy from Discord and Applejack? :pinkiehappy:

CONCOOORDIAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! :twilightangry2: :flutterrage:

7928397 What is a shenanigan?

8065289 a shenanigan is basically like a joke or funny situation that will happen . Like for example someone drops a banana peel and someone else Trips over it.

After then reading this I listen Fuck the Police

8073403 thanks english isn't my main language but I'm doing my Best to learn it.
(I'm Turkish by the way)

8074153 That's fine I understand, English is hard to learn

There was a sigh before the barn door slowly opened. The cowgirl that usually wore a Stetson hat walked out wearing long purple silk gloves on her hooves to go with her red glittering sequin dress while her mane was combed over her right eye and she had make-up on her face with bright red lipstick colored on her lips.

Jessica Rabbit reference!

8083466 Finally! Someone got it! :pinkiehappy:

I was hoping the alicorns would tie AJ's and Fluttershy's lifespans to their mate. (Why can't I ever find a story where Spike doesn't end up being alone for the rest of his long life after his mate dies. :fluttercry: )

All in all, this was a good story and I enjoyed the references. Though the ending was indeed rushed.

*walks away with a gun and body bag, a loud bang is heard, comes back with Concordia's head sticking out*
Any more problems I should know about? Hmm, this head is going to be lovely hanging up above my fireplace! Wonderful! :pinkiecrazy:

Or, you know, Discord could just make Fluttershy a fuckin immortal!

in my mind LOOOOOOOOOOOOL...dummies

So far love how this is going

"YOU DARE QUESTION THE NATRUAL OF ORDER OF THINGS! A PONY AND DRAGON CANNOT LOVE EACH OTHER! THEY MUST STAY WITH THEIR OWN SPECIES!"

Says the one who wanted to marry the God of chaos

Excuse me for my French but *clears throat*

Ooooooooooh

Who's the bitch that lives in hot lava

Concordia!!

Who I see dying in smoking hot lava

Concordia!!

While Fluttercord is out to play and she's there to stay

TO DIE A VERY SLOW DEATH, WHERE HER CORPSE WILL BAKE

IN THAT SMOKING HOT LAVAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

*clears throat*

Hoped you liked my solo I made up and I really hope Concordia dies so slow :scootangel::trollestia:

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Ikr! It would make things less complicated

You know I really liked your story! Although I like to think that, 'cause they are the spirits of the Elements of Harmony, the main 6's spirits live on or something like that....or that they are simply immortal. But anyways great story and keep up the good work! 😄

maybe an epilogue? so and so years later

8083466
Whoaaaaaaaa you’re right! It’s Jessica rabbit! Applejack is Jessica rabbit asa pony in that scene! Xd

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