I am an outcast. Ever since the attack on Canterlot, things have gone from bad, to worse. For our tribe, food has become even more scarce, families are fighting and to top it all off, I am being hunted by both Pony and Changeling alike. I can't stop. I can't live. I can't fight. All I can do is run, and never look back.
I am an Outcast.
I am a Changeling.
This is my story.
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Hey guys! Snazzy Hat here! Hopefully this newest fan fic won't cause me to run out of steam and just let it disintergrate like my last one. I also apologise for the admittedly rubbish title art. However, if you would like to offer your fantastic artistic or Photoshop skills, please give me a PM.
LOL, firstblock!
Umad?
This is actually pretty good, I give you a fav and a thumps up for good writing, story and plot
Will need more though
Oooh~ I like.
Admittedly, it is quite fast-paced, and it wouldn't hurt to slow it down somewhat, but I suppose I'll keep watching.
Oh, and by the way: "My snapped my eyes open as they dropped their disguises"
Typo.
EDIT: it took FOUR DAYS for this to be approved? Me gusta.
Looking interesting so far. I shall be watching this, with my eyes.
And that really is one snazzy hat you've got there.
More?