Creativity in its purest form is self-expression. I choose to try to express myself in everything I do.
Golden Glow has always been a feminine stallion, but how in the name of the Royal throne did he get elected as the princess of the country of Equestria? And it's not like he can back out early. He has to follow his Royal duties! He owes it to Equestria!
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Oh god hahaha
I feel sorry for him
Wuh- wuh-wuh-What?
WHAT?!?!?
A fun fanfic to read.
got to love the 4th wall brakes
Awesome can't wait for the next chapter ^~^
I love the fan fic my wifu ^~^
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeee I love the story my wonderful wifu ^~^
AWWW This is so incredibly CUTE! Oh my gosh I am so jealous of Golden. This feels like a pony version of an anime where a pretty boy becomes the school princess (there's an anime like that, Princess is in the title). I really like the fact that everyone takes it as fact that Golden is simply the Princess and the only one questioning it is him. It's like a positive fantasy where everyone sees the beauty but he doesn't. I really like this type of goodhearted fantasy :)
This is the only part of the story that speaks in first person. Now, this can work, but I would recommend putting it in italics so it stands apart from the next line which is in third person.
Oh my gosh this is so anime I love it <3 <3
i think SAT needs to be lowercase :P
I like these little details which add to the story world. I'm a big fan of knowing how the rules and customs of the story create the interactions for the characters. Like "these are the rules. This is how we deal with them"
I think you mean "meeting princes" :P
Aww it's so sweet they sleep near each other. That bit of intimacy is very much envied by many readers. If you ever have any doubts about that, simply look at the top stories and how many are romance related :P
AWWWWWW YAY! SHIPPING WILL OCCUR! SHIPPING IS HERE!
I really like this story! Good start! *HUGS*
8042395 Funny thing, it's actually heavily inspired off of a lot of anime and manga. One of the biggest inspirations it has is probably one of my alltime favorites: Dawn of The Arcana. While this one seems to have a very different theme, it does have a similar dream-like feel to it, only this story is far more comedic, whereas in Dawn of The Arcana, any comic relief through the narrative is heavily toned down and the overall tone is darker and more serious.
That's a good idea, I'll probably fix stuff once I get done reworking Aria.
Heh, that reaction is very similar to many others I've received. Glad you're enjoying it so far.
This is what I get for writing my stories on a mobile device. I get Autocorrect telling me I'm wrong. But you know, apparently there's a very prestigious academic sitting down test, I guess.
I do and don't like that kind of storytelling. I like when it's explained, but I also like it when the world is shown to the reader instead of outright explained. I tried for something in between with this story.
Dear Autocorrect, please go burn in he'll.
Very true, though I will point out that, unlike a lot of romance, this one isn't an immediate thing. While I specifically made Golden and Marble cute together, they're not yet in a relationship. It's just not something I'm going to introduce quite yet. But the ship shall be canon before terribly long ;)
Ssssssshhhhhh! DeviantArt might hear you!
I'm glad to hear it. I'm actually enjoying writing it far more than any other story. I've gotten some fans of Aria, and I honestly like that I did that, but the chapters are so demoralizing to write, I find myself putting it off all the time. I think it would be different if Aria was more of a comedic fiction, but I'm not going to present that subject as a comedic story, that would feel like a mockery of it, you know?
7949635 Glad you're enjoying it, favorite person! ^^
7928563 Golden looked at the audience, hearing one fan speak up, "I know, right?"
7924437 Glad you're enjoying it.
7923154 "What?" The author said.
Golden looked up, "Wh-what?"
"Hmm?" Marble looked at the reader in curiosity.
Lily also looked past the fourth wall, "Huh?"
"Excuse me, did you have a question, by any chance?" Authority figure inquired.
7923087 Enjoying the story?