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Picardy Third


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Scootaloo loves her mother more than any other pony on the planet. On this particular night, however, her mother has a rather unsettling message for the young filly, and Scootaloo doesn't exactly realize the impact that it delivers.

Based on a poem/song I wrote entitled "Don't Cry"

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OH COME ON!!!!!! 12 FRICKIN SECONDS!!!

IM FAILING TO ENTER DISGUNBGUD.GIF

Well for those of us who actually read it...

I must say it was nice, while the whole "I will be with you in your heart" thing is kind of cliched this was still an entertaining read.

The detail was a bit much at times, Scoots bedroom I believe being the prime example. But just the right amount most of the other time.

Also? Why can't poor scoots actually have a dad?!

(also I got to be the first view apparently, so that was kinda neat!)

Those above me are acting like little shits
Anyway, this story is remarkable, and with a few revisions, the I could definately see this making the featured box :twilightsmile:

Beautiful story with a beautiful message. I want you to know this; forget 'manly tears' this had me outright bawling by the end and that hasn't happened since I read "Order of the Pheonix" years ago. Poor Scootaloo.

Hasbro for the love of Celestia give that little filly some family! :raritycry: :applecry:

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Wow beautiful, way to go to touch other people's hearts!

Scootaloo's family is something to write (and create) about, the show didn't introduce any family of hers, and as such, great stories can come from what is unknown, since there are no boundaries.

It was always a mystery about Scootaloo's family, and also the fact that she is in Ponyville, since Pegasi come from Cloudsdale.

Nice work!

It's as sad as My Little Dashie :fluttercry::raritycry::applecry::pinkiesad2: Definitely going to be featured soon.

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Everytime somepony says that, somehow, someway, it receives at least 2 downvotes. :ajbemused:

i hate you.
that was a very sad fic, almost making me cry right here at work! :P

very good fic. :)

Oh right, that's why I don't read sad stories... If I had any tears left, I would still be crying at this moment. :fluttercry:

859311 That music fits this story perfectly.

You rely too heavily on dialogue to carry the story--don't afraid of introspection.

Aaaaaaand, I'm crying....again. You bastards and your good writing and relatable stories. I hope you never quit.

You made me cry at a wall of text.

That is a tremendous feat.

WELL DONE.

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Fuck manly tears. I just cried. I applaud you.

Tears actually formed in my eyes, and I had to force them down because of this.

You sir are a master to get me to do that. You deserve the feature box.

859680 from what movie is that?

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859386 Yeah, I think it does also. That song is a combination of two previous ones in the game, and not only is it the end theme, it also plays during one of the sadder moments on a pretty sad albeit action packed game. It's a very strong song.

Although, I think this one fits the later part of this story better, and is the one half of the previous song:

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Lyrics:
♫I set my sail
fly the wind it will take me
back to my home, sweet home

Lie on my back
clouds are making way for me
I'm coming home, sweet home

I see your star you left it burning for me
Mother, I'm here

Eyes open wide
feel your heart and it's glowing
I'm welcome home, sweet home

I take your hand
now you'll never be lonely
not when I'm home, sweet home

I see your star, you left it burning for me
Mother, I'm here♫

By Celestia! Right in the feels! Well done, well done. Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

This was a completely beautiful story, and it was so difficult to keep in the manly tears at work! I hope to see more from you, amazing work.

This fic is so sad, and is it wrong for me to admit that I didn't cry even if I wanted to? :fluttercry:

So many emotions! :fluttercry::applecry::raritycry::raritydespair: Great story, it gives Scootaloo some form of a background. I think it should be up with My Little Dashie!

Seriously. It makes want to report it for not being featured. THIS IS A MASTERPEICE!

This was very very sad to read. I actually felt bad for Scootaloo and I did legit shed manly tears for this story. A few little changes here and there with certain words could always be fixed and other than that, I loved this fan fic.

its a really nice and touchig story :scootangel:

Reading this whilst listening to 'you'll be in my heart' by philip Collins should be illegal I've not cried so much in ages :fluttercry:

Awesome work though. :pinkiehappy:


This story is amazing! It really has a sad feeling to it. :fluttercry: Great job!

As I now have read the last few paragraphs, I am taken by heart of the tears the fill my eyes, where a few of them have hit they keyboard. This is a very well done piece of work, if only could be seen by a few humdred more people.
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I sort of had an argument with my mother today about my future plans in life, but now after reading this...
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I gotta go give her a hug now

Thank you for giving me such a memorable story. this is going into my favs and I think I'll read it again sometime in the future.

972360 Comments like this are why I love writing :pinkiesad2:

972966 Don't we as writer and artist crave the nice comments? I ment every word I said in this story because I feel that good work deserves praise and a properly made comment for such good work. Keep writing! I know I will :rainbowwild:

Finally read this. Very well written! I am so glad I saw the picture you made.

:fluttercry: Very sweet. It's not as totally depressing as Remember, but it still ends very bittersweet. 10/10, very nice job.

I think....I think my tears have made it impossible to wear this shirt today. :fluttercry:

Now I have to pick out another shirt. :raritycry:

But yes, great story.

very lion king

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Wow, I've never thought of it that way before... it totally is haha.
Only instead of living with a couple of random strangers found in the country, Scootaloo lives with her grandparents. Basically the same thing, though, right?

yeah....it's still good, but thats something that came to my mind:ajsmug:

I found this very sad. I could not help myself but to cry a few manly tears. The vivid detail in this story was truly amazing. I could imagine every last moment of this with absolute clarity. You made Scoot's mother seem very beautiful as well. Great story, keep up the great writing!

Oh look its raining on my pillow

Where was her dad during all of this?

So touching, stop making me cry!

THE FEELS GAH! 💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔

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