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Gpizano


Just a pegasister who likes art, fanfics, and perchance writing.

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This story is a sequel to Live Life


After the loss of a friend, Sunset Shimmer, her girlfriend Jackie and their friends are trying to get on with their lives in Los Pegasus. Jackie is taking the loss the hardest and after an incident she goes missing, leaving Sunset to worry for her girlfriend's safety and waiting for when their latest enemy will strike.

Nothing will ever be the same....

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Part 2 of the Pandora Arc and it's gonna be another doozy folks! When our heroes are at their lowest, will they rise to the occasion or is this new darkness simply too great to overcome?

Read to find out!

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 47 )

7925870 Hopefully that's a good whoa. XD

Well, it's not a good situation the gang is finding themselves in but you know. XD

I didn't know Poppy's injuries were that bad. Still, why a real estate agent? There are better paying and more reputable jobs...

7925954 Well all things considered with Poppy's injuries.

And Real Estate Agent came to mind as a second option for the mom (the dad's profession is still up in the air but it's well to do as well). I wanted them to have cash and be well off but not so much so that it wouldn't make sense for Poppy to go into the public education system where she could go to school with Tino and Jackie.

7926364 Yeah, the Pandora arc is a bit more action-y to start I guess you could say. XD

Noooooo!!!!:raritycry: this is really good keep it up :ajsmug:

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This is looking great so far.

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Thanks to the both of you. It makes me glad I changed my original plans for the direction this was going in. XD

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7978676 What was your original direction anyway?

7978721 Basically a much shorter battle and then it would've gone into more soap opera territory. Then this direction came to me about two chapters back and I liked it a lot more.

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7978782 Yeah, good call on expanding the story.

7978821 Well expanding and basically chucking my previous ideas. Instead of planning it out I'll just do what I usually do and go with my gut. XD

And I said that I do not forgive her. I always knew Miss Vibrato was a bad seed. A loser from a broken family that would just drag my daughter down with her. I wanted Poppy to go to college, to take up a better career, instead, Miss Vibrato enabled her into wretched body art, playing in some worthless band and working a back breaking job. Do you know how long it was the last time I even talked to Poppy!?

Now i know what i'm about to suggest as a response may not be the best thing to say to a grieving mother, but given what she said to her no hold's are barred!
I'd let her know that maybe if she wasn't such an elitist prick who rejected her daughter for her life choices maybe she would have visited her once in a while and then maybe poppy would still be alive.

THEN i would subsequently get pounded into the dirt by someone thrice my age and half a foot shorter than me.

Like a boss :coolphoto:

8009352 More or less. XD

Life is just really messy so it's hard for things. XD

Omg
Yes poppy
I can just imagine people reaction to the chaos.
Saint john: what the....whos puking and leaving gunk everywhere?! Did someone let Discord in again?!

Dash, you're a loser

But you're our loser

Us excluding Sunset

Can't wait to see how the Deus Ex Machina their way outta this! :kappa:

Nothing's worse than a power-hungry, magic-sucking Ganondorf wannabe.

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Whoa.....oh boy...:rainbowderp:

8193508 Yeah I hate it when that happens. XD

8193749 WOO HOO, I still got it. XD

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8195751 Very funny. :ajbemused: Again, nice work!

The fic's title's "Open your Heart" bigfunnyblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/10/e1fd953c6215217ecb6615389abd75d8.627x325x1.jpg
Must....resist.....urge.....to make....obvious....song.....reference.....

Dayyyuuummmmmmmmmmmm, shit is getting pretty intense up in here! *notices i reached the actual end this time* Noooooooooooooo......guess I'll have to wait it out then. Looking forward to more!

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Dude, there's a reason I call the Pandora Arc the Crush 40 arc as well. XD

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Yeah, this is around the time I've lost steam for writing after putting out so much work. I confirm that I DO plan on finishing this arc at the very least though.

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Well that's a relief at least, because boy is this easy to get obsessed with XP

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Well I'm glad you like it. XD

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Yay! Glad you like. Sorry it took so long. :twilightblush:

Nice to see it finally get closure. Can't wait for the next part that'll linger around for months at a time. :rainbowwild:

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XD made me think of this

Also I'm glad this finally closed out, looking forward to whatever comes :twilightsmile:(or doesn't, I'm not the boss of you:derpytongue2:)

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Lol!

And yeah, I do have plans for more stuff cause well, the human world is now basically changed forever and stuff. But we'll see if I can get my full gumption back to keep writing. Thanks for sticking it out dude. XD

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If it appears, you bet I'll click the f:yay:k out of it.
Go-go gadget gumption :rainbowwild:

"Good. Then take care of yourself Jacks... I'll miss you."

*Hnnngggggghhhh!* right in the damn feels!

I am loving this whole universe! Definitely following and faving all of this! You are a good story teller!

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Thanks, glad you enjoy it.

Great story. I liked discord in it. And I liked the ending makes me wonder what the original idea was.
The fact you still have plans for another part makes me squee happily :D

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My original idea was a lot more sad and drama and after a bit I though "... nahhhhhh, they need to have a happy end"

And I'm happy you're excited for the next part. XD

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yeah after poppy I'm like "AHHHH! NOO GIVE ME HAPPY!"
and yes! in this universe I am always excited :D

I have read them all.. There are no more..give me more please

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Dang, what did you do, speed read? XD

I do have another sequel in mind. I'll get around to it when I can. XP

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K so I just finished reading the last part and realized it ended on nub-day like 3 years ago plus there’s other chapters on my birthday and idk if that makes me self centered but I just really liked that fact.
Anyway hope the sequel comes soon your doing great. 😁😍👍🏾

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(very long time to reply to this but)
...You know what, FORGET FIGHTING IT! (ahem)


All the steps we take, all the moves we make, ALL the pain at stake
I see the chaos for everyone! Who are we? What can we do?
You and I are in the same way that we have our own styles that we won't change
Yours is filled with evil and mine is not
There is no way I can lose!

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