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To late in the morning, I'll read later but this has promise from just the description.
Edit: read, liked and faved and hoping for more soon.
Also, have a Hydralisk eat Rainbow. I'd also say Rarity but she's rotten to the core
Did you write Remnant of the Swarm on fanfict. https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11759010/1/Remnant-of-the-Swarm
I'm actually the original author.
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Cool
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No
Bad SeventhBrony, bad! *waves a rolled up newspaper around*
This was packed with action and background info is all here in full
Awesome chapter!
You forgot Broodmother Zagara, the official swarm leader as of the end of Starcraft 2.
7945662 I explained already about what happened to Zagara. Reread the first prologue again.
7945679 I meant in the description.
7945697 Exactly. In my Fic Zagara is dead and the Ceres took her place.
7945701 Then it should say that Zagara was #3, The Cerebrate was #4, and Dusk Shine is #5. If all this happened before the story even started it doesn't really count as spoilers.
7945706 Sorry my bad. What I meant to say was that Zagara in my fic was killed BEFORE Ceres was found and reintegrated into the Swarm.
7945719 So the story is built off of a Starcraft AU where Zagara died early. You might want to make that clear up front so other lore nerds don't get on your case about it.
7945741 That's why I usually have a Q&A at the end of every chapter. To answer questions that readers might have about a particular chapter. I'll tell everyone in my next chapter, thanks for the heads up. :)
7945744 You should still adjust your description a bit. Right now it looks like you're misinformed on Starcraft lore instead of making an intentional departure from it.
This is amazing.... it's a bit over 2 AM in finland and i can say that this chapter made the time being awake and not sleeping worth it
Like the part of the creep not killing everything it comes in contact with, easier to hide what he's doing.
Also, don't have him going out to his hive every time he can. To obvious, something like that would make someone suspicious
Hmm interesting story but arent Zerg more of a destroy worlds to expand the hive kind of beings? Kind of like locusts?
Never played much of starcraft2 but they seemed like it to me....
7963213 They use to be, but now it all depends on who's leading them. Compared to other scifi swarmy alien-like races, the Zerg are a lot more negotiable and can possibly be reasoned with, and that's saying something.
This is one of the fastest favorite I've ever had.
amazing story I do not see many stories do a crossover with the zerg so this is a welcome breath of fresh air can not wait for the next chapter
I hope to god you bring in the Primal Zerg!
Celestia at her smartest always has in her position, the biggest IDIOT ball to ever exist!
I once had the idea of a more raptor like zergling that had high damage, speed, attack speed, and cliff jumping but low defense, and health and was bipedal sorta like
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But more ya know zergy
I wanna see Dusk meet Chrysalis
That has to be an interesting event that we will eventually see
8002942 .... That's nice... Was the bold bigger font and orange colors necessary?
OK so i'm confused about the whole burning canterlot invasion scene. It looked more like he was showing Luna exactly what he could do than any kind of nightmare. It is possible for the Dusk's mind conjure that kind of image by mixing the memories of Ceras and himself in the form of a nightmare but with the context it that doesn't fit quite right. And we would have seen some ponies with rifles and what not.
8004087 The dream was during Dusk's transformation in the Zerg pod. This is Dusk's own dream of the possible future, it has nothing to do with Ceres. Also Luna is the one who saw it as a nightmare not Dusk (Can you really blame her?). Also Dusk didn't plan for Luna to come but used the situation given to him anyways.
8004630 Ah the sixth sense theory, bullshit, thing. I was just thinking Dusk made the dream when he sensed Luna trying to enter or something. I do know how dreams work that's why I was speculating.
8004067 YES
8004913 OK
and the story keeps going nice job cant wait for the next chapter
8005218 YeY you have joined me
8007743 FOR THE SWARM
8007912 FOR THE SWARM
What if the drones get a localized psychic field where they can use to carry more resources back to the hive
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Sorry, I couldn't resist.
8027546 I understand after all
WAAAAAAAAAAGH!!
MORE! FOR THE SWARM!!
This prologue is realy familiar.
Aren't you writing a RWBY crossover on fanfiction??
8037593 I'm the same author yes.
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You just got your self a follower
I realy looking forward for the next chapter
It appears that i've stumbled on a gem in a deeps of the void.
Like\fave and please don't die on us, this looks way too good, to just be one of those forgotten stories that everybody wants, but nobody writes.
loving it, hope for an update soon. Will be nice to see the drama unfold between Celestia and Co and Dusk
And so the ponies bring death to their civilization, couldn't happen to a more deserving bunch. The problem comes when they drag the rest of the world down with them
8197443 no
No offense, but I'm going to say that you are wrong
nice, but no doubt knowing Luna and Celestia they will plot his downfall and cause the destruction or assimilation of all equis
I love this story however since I've started this chapter I have been physically yelling at the screen saying. "No you idiots! He won't bother you, if you don't bother him! He told you! You are all going to die and it's on your Princess's heads when you do!"