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Razor Blade the Unicron
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So it begans...
i like this. i'm interested in seeing where this goes, seeing as darkwood was a single chapter story.i look forward to future chapters
Okay, at first I thought the "Thy" in the title was a typo, but then you did it again. I don't get it. It's equivalent to saying "Your pony of Timberwolves". Are you building up to something, or am I just missing something obvious?
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It could be seen as Darkwood exerting power over the ponies who hear her title. Like "Your Lord" instead of "The Lord."
7928655 ...I guess? Still, at least to me it comes across as very awkwardly phrased. Like the literary equivalent of a tile floor with once piece breaking the pattern.
(Plus that still doesn't explain/justify its usage in the title.)
This was a nice story. Will there be more of Darkwood later on? I think she'd be great for a long adventure story.
8107056 Maybe I'll write another story about her.
Really well made, great job!
I can see this story going on how twilight and friends use the elements to help darkwood be alive and they all get connected in a way that means they never die or something like that.
Awesome story tho