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Stan, Kyle, Eric, and Kenny. Four boys from Colorado have taken an opportunity to go to school in Ponyville. Coincidentally their first day of school in Equestria is the day before the annual Apple One Derby. Can these young men put together a race-worthy cart in one day without killing themselves or any of the ponies? This story is a reimagining of the episode, “The Cart Before the Ponies.”
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Didn't they already learn their lesson at the Pinewood Derby? God dammit.
EDIT: okay fine, that was just Randy (and Stan, I guess). But still.
Good start, will other South Park characters appear?
Hey, this was actually really good! You captured the boys really well, and aside from some obvious plotholes and gaps left there for comedic purposes, it was decently written and the jokes were all very clever. I especially appreciate the great job you did with Cartman's dialogue.
This is almost like it could be straight from an episode of South Park. Fucking slain, great job.
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Naw. What you see is what you get as far as South Park guys go.
7909579
why would the boys go to the gay world of equestria?
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Eh, Kenny probably wanted to go. (I can see him being a Brony)
Stan and Kyle for their parts probably didn't really want to go to Equestria but since they're friends with Kenny they decided to tag along and drag Cartman with them because they'd know he would hate it. (And honestly that's probably worth the price of admission right there.)
7909726 another thing: Don't censor yourself. No child is reading this. Also, I think cartman would've sweared anyway.
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Thank bud. We intend to
7909786
You're probably right. But it's a personal rule of ours to have at least some censorship in what we produce on this site. In our opinion what we censored belongs in a Mature rated story. On this site no one would probably care, but we do.
Does this mean the Cutie Mark Crusaders will be playing a big role in this story? Shouldn't they get their own? Will Scootaloo beating up Cartman?
7909786 I personally think that the censorship kinda works, since Comedy Central censored SP for so long it kinda feels like having a thousand bleeps (or %$#$'s in this case) gives it a bit of that south park feel.
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Those are all good questions my friend. But we'll have to wait and see where the story takes us.
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I is a child
If they are staying at the Castle, shoudnt they be corrupting spike? , he is a dragon, they should have some kind of respect for him.
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Oh yeah Spike would probably be pulling his proverbial hair out. But, he and Twilight may be showing up later on just to see how everything is goin. I know I would.
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This reminds me of a quote. "With 30,000 soldiers under my command the Prussian boarders are wherever I say they are." I can't remember who said that or if the quote is right, but . . . you get what I'm trying to say.
Merica hell yeah! Gonna go and win this race yeah!
7909554 That would be giving them too much credit.
7910414 Yeah, fair enough. especially in Randy's case
Normally, I don't read stories if it has a gore tag on it (with a few exceptions). For this one, it's actually the other way around; it doesn't have a gore tag and yet it has the Southpark boys in it? Does that mean that Kenny isn't going to die is some nasty fashion? It's super easy to imagine Kenny crashing his cart, getting launched into the air, and getting impaled on Rarity's horn.
Since this doesn't have a gore tag, I'm going to assume that Kenny isn't going to die.
Twilight: Dear sweet Celestia! They killed Kenny!
Lyra: You bastards!
Waiting for more...
Color me interested in this,
hohoh
Nicely done
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Glad you liked it bud.
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I look forward to more, hehe
Please continue this! This is great! Actually kinda feels like an ACTUAL South Park episode!
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Thanks bud.
This story will go on.
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Glad you're liking the story bud.
I'm working on a few other projects at the moment but rest assured I will get back to this one in due time.
7909859 Yeah, but the uncensored episodes have more of a south park feel.
If Kenny dies, I'm reporting you.
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What Flutters had in store for Eric is pure gold and it's about time he had some karmic retribution for the shit he pulled.
Oooooh Christ, this was great XD Hehehehe, we need more South Park/MLP crossovers, this was great.
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indeed.
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Thanks bud.
Okay, this so
ing hilarious! the dialogue feels like it came straight out of the old South Park episodes. I enjoyed this so much I'm not even going to question how or why the boys are in Equestria in the first place.
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No probs
XD Awesome chapter!
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Thanks guys.
I love it. South Park is always funny, and this is the best thing I’ve seen all day
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Excellent. My work here is done.
Great story is great!
Ami the only one who gets the title
Wow, even in a world with no humans, Cartman is still a diehard racist bigot.
And yet, I wouldn't want it any other way!
I love the twist you made in the story that Kenny does get brutally killed in the MLP verse, but rather downright humiliated