After leaving Tina at the docks of New York, Magizoologist Newton Artemist Fido Scamander decides to take a sabbatical before going to submit the manuscript for his book. During an excursion to Africa, Newt finds a strange port key that sends him to a strange land where not only do ponies rule, but where he is a pony himself. Now he must learn to adapt to his new environment, and learn as much as he can about the new and fascinating creatures of the realm he now finds himself in.
You have my curiosity, lets se where this takes us.
Ah Newt save for the lack of power in it, that rabbit is one of the most vile things in Equestria...
Yes! Yes! You have my attention, so lets see what the next chapter will be like!
Newt and his magical suitcase in Equestria, sweet
He and Fluttershy would be great friends.
Aw man, I wonder how the other ponies will react to his suitcase full of creatures.
Hey, lovers of my story, who wants to be editor/prereader for the next chapter(s)?
Oh I really am enjoying this story, and its only the second chapter.
I wonder if this is gonna be a Newt and Fluttershy pairing at all?
I look forward to seeing and reading more of this.
Enjoying this story immensely thus far. Looking forward to more Newt and Fluttershy, they work well together.
Ah, the Normal to Pinkie Pie scale. I wonder where Twilight falls on that one.
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Technically it's the first chapter. There's only the Prologue and the First Chapter. . As for your questions, you'll just have to wait and see.
This was good, but when writing, please remember TIPTOP in regards to pargraphing.
Always make a new paragraph when changing the following:
Time
Place
Topic
Person
It'll make the story much less confusing and easier to follow.
Update?....
So great seeing this story updated.
So looking forward to the new FBAWFT film.
🎵Fluttershy has a crush.🎵 But seriously, nice chapter and can't wait for more.
This is cute, looking forward to the next chapter.
Un buen capitulo algo corto pero disfrutable lo felicitó siga así e animo.
What house are you in if you don't mind me asking? (I'm a hufflepuff, just like Newt :D )
Wait till Twilight see what inside his suitcase. I bet Fluttershy would want to spend her weekend there.
why am I saying to myself in my golom imprishtion good good preshes more more ?
ps this is epic
Just checking, because sometimes I found that the system didn't show the actual update of tracked stories.
Nonetheless, is the new chapter coming soon?
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Yes. Remember, the best potions aren't rushed. They take time, patience. A new chapter will come in due time.
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If you said that in rhyme I would call you Zecora.
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I'll take that as a compliment
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waiting is so hard.
Dude, that rabbit may not look like it, but it's one of the most dangerous rabbits in the multiverse, secretely up there with Bun Bun from Sluggy Freelance. ;)
*facepalm* fluttershy? Angel can take care of himself. Don't start worrying unless it's been three days and you find a bunny body. When you do, burn it, poke around in the ashes, and wait another three days. Just in case.
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I got that reference!
This bunny is another one to be careful around.
well, i'd like to read more. perhaps you could start a new paragraph when a new char. speaks? and use Italics for thoughts, so we can differentiate them from dialogue?
maybe an update will come today... memesmonkey.com/images/memesmonkey/60/60609585134a10f82a1371c5558019ce.jpeg
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last I heard this particular rabbit was a vorpal bunny.
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at least an eight after the want it need it situation.
Pls update friend of friends!
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Also, only one person gets to talk during a paragraph. As soon as someone says something else, that's a new paragraph.
Your
More?
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the "Doom Bunny" *snickers*
glad i read the update note before i decided to read this lol. As much as i love the premise (despite not haing seen the movie) i would hate to have gotten to this point to learn that the story (for now) is temporarilly discontinued lol